An Angel in the Meadow
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm all out of sixes! Your story has a sweet innocence that I love. If only more people were like Brett and Angel, what a wonderful world this would be. So, God is having a rest, and his children are going to play!!! Hmm. Grandpa was a huge influence in Brett's life, and so much love, that I can understand how he grew up to be such a good man. An angel is perfect for him. I really enjoyed this chapter, and look forward to the next one. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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I'm all out of sixes! Your story has a sweet innocence that I love. If only more people were like Brett and Angel, what a wonderful world this would be. So, God is having a rest, and his children are going to play!!! Hmm. Grandpa was a huge influence in Brett's life, and so much love, that I can understand how he grew up to be such a good man. An angel is perfect for him. I really enjoyed this chapter, and look forward to the next one. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Hi, Sandra!
Out of sixes, huh? That's alright, 'cause your smile means more to Cathy and I--"Toot, Toot! Are you looking? A "SALUTE," to you for the awesome review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All are an honor. Our reply to your words, "I really enjoyed this chapter, and look forward to the next one," is "YA, YA, YA--thanks for making our day!" Great hearing from you. Best wishes and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an AWESOME chapter in your collaborative work, Bill and Cathy. First the cover design is beautiful. The image is striking and the color scheme really sets it off and lets readers have a feeling of what they are about to read.
The prelude is beautifully worded. I love the inclusion of the Bible verse. The discussion directed at readers is thought-provoking, too. The 'about the authors' makes readers feel as if both authors are speaking to each reader individually.
The setting is well-described. The rich imagery lets readers feel as if they are there in the meadow seeing/hearing this story as it unfolds. I love the way the authors include the butterflies, fireflies, the stars in the sky, and the fact that Bill chose to talk to God in the meadow among all of His beauty. The conversation with God and Bill sounds true to life. We gain insight into Bill's character from it. Readers, also, learn more about the family dynamics of Bill's family. I love how he reminisces about Grandpa and Grandma and his years living with them. It is easy to understand how important their relationship with each other was and how it made Bill the way he is.
The conversation Bill and God have about Angel sets the tone for her character. Readers learn a little of her life and dreams and heartache, too. They learn that angels are like humans and our interactions with them is special. This is the 'prelude' coming to action.
The cliffhangar makes me want to return to find out what happens next. The thunder and lightning can mean several things and offer more avenues to take this story.
Thank you Cathy and Bill for sharing.
Excellent!
Laura
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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This is an AWESOME chapter in your collaborative work, Bill and Cathy. First the cover design is beautiful. The image is striking and the color scheme really sets it off and lets readers have a feeling of what they are about to read.
The prelude is beautifully worded. I love the inclusion of the Bible verse. The discussion directed at readers is thought-provoking, too. The 'about the authors' makes readers feel as if both authors are speaking to each reader individually.
The setting is well-described. The rich imagery lets readers feel as if they are there in the meadow seeing/hearing this story as it unfolds. I love the way the authors include the butterflies, fireflies, the stars in the sky, and the fact that Bill chose to talk to God in the meadow among all of His beauty. The conversation with God and Bill sounds true to life. We gain insight into Bill's character from it. Readers, also, learn more about the family dynamics of Bill's family. I love how he reminisces about Grandpa and Grandma and his years living with them. It is easy to understand how important their relationship with each other was and how it made Bill the way he is.
The conversation Bill and God have about Angel sets the tone for her character. Readers learn a little of her life and dreams and heartache, too. They learn that angels are like humans and our interactions with them is special. This is the 'prelude' coming to action.
The cliffhangar makes me want to return to find out what happens next. The thunder and lightning can mean several things and offer more avenues to take this story.
Thank you Cathy and Bill for sharing.
Excellent!
Laura
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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WOW! An "AWESOME" review, Laura Jan! A "SALUTE" for the Six Star Award, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of the above is an "HONOR!" Absolutely the most "INCREDIBLE REVIEW" I have received on FanStory. Will Cathy and I nominate you for the "REVIEWERS AWARD? You betcha! YA, YA, YA--"Thanks for making our day!" Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Cathy and Bill, happy Tuesday to you both. I enjoyed your story, your characters and dialogue really keep the reader engaged. I enjoy your unique style of "spiritual romance", good job!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Hello Cathy and Bill, happy Tuesday to you both. I enjoyed your story, your characters and dialogue really keep the reader engaged. I enjoy your unique style of "spiritual romance", good job!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Our Friend!
Great hearing from you. Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of the above is an honor. Having you say, I enjoy your style of "spiritual romance" just made our day. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Well, this kind of came up as an interesting comparison to a movie I just watched a day or two ago that came out way back in 1990 called "Almost An Angel" with Paul Hogan and Linda Kozlowski. For some reason, it didn't do as well in the box office. But the idea that an angel can be more human than angel definitely has appeal for readers who are also more human than angel. I think if God "whispered down" it would not end with an exclamation mark. But your enthusiasm shines through.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Well, this kind of came up as an interesting comparison to a movie I just watched a day or two ago that came out way back in 1990 called "Almost An Angel" with Paul Hogan and Linda Kozlowski. For some reason, it didn't do as well in the box office. But the idea that an angel can be more human than angel definitely has appeal for readers who are also more human than angel. I think if God "whispered down" it would not end with an exclamation mark. But your enthusiasm shines through.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Hi, Crystie!
It is an honor meeting you. A "SALUTE," for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Thanks for making our day! Best wishes for an awesome week ahead and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from DonandVicki
Excellent collaboration of writers. I guess several writers do come up with powerful stories.Your story engages the readers imagination as all good stories should attempt to do. Well written.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Excellent collaboration of writers. I guess several writers do come up with powerful stories.Your story engages the readers imagination as all good stories should attempt to do. Well written.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Hello again, Don and Vicki!
Great hearing from you. A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of the above is an honor, our friends. Thanks for making our day, best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Cindy Warren
I hope you will continue this. I look forward to more chapters. The angel is a little bit naughty and not too perfect. Kind of like us humans. Best of luck with your book.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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I hope you will continue this. I look forward to more chapters. The angel is a little bit naughty and not too perfect. Kind of like us humans. Best of luck with your book.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Hi, Cindy!
It is an honor meeting you, our friend. Will we continue this? You betcha! A "SALUTE," to you for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of the above is appreciated. Thanks for making our day. Best wishes for an awesome week ahead and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautiful story and I think is very suitable for a younger age. I liked a lot these sentences:""I'm always with you, don't you forget. Yes, I hear you, Bret. Yet, it's going to take an angel who is an expert on human behavior because she must contend with your 'attention-seeking, dramatic way of speaking, rapid shifts in emotion, and self-centered personality.' Have faith in me, my son--I'm looking." This sounded very funny and witty and in a way settle the mood for the rest of the chapter.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Beautiful story and I think is very suitable for a younger age. I liked a lot these sentences:""I'm always with you, don't you forget. Yes, I hear you, Bret. Yet, it's going to take an angel who is an expert on human behavior because she must contend with your 'attention-seeking, dramatic way of speaking, rapid shifts in emotion, and self-centered personality.' Have faith in me, my son--I'm looking." This sounded very funny and witty and in a way settle the mood for the rest of the chapter.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Greetings, Iza!
Great hearing from you again, our friend. A "SALUTE," to you for making our day! Cathy and I appreciate the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of the above is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration.
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Lobber
Hi,
You've got me hooked.. I'm 72 and walking/living proof that angels are amongst us ... I'm not religious but I do believe ..... Hope to hear more - Lobber
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Hi,
You've got me hooked.. I'm 72 and walking/living proof that angels are amongst us ... I'm not religious but I do believe ..... Hope to hear more - Lobber
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2019