Love Long Distance
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and good chapter. This had a lot of action in it due to the flirty nurse. I would have been like Cathy. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue too. I enjoyed reading this very much. I did not see any spag or errors. Blessings, Teri Keep on writing you two!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written and good chapter. This had a lot of action in it due to the flirty nurse. I would have been like Cathy. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue too. I enjoyed reading this very much. I did not see any spag or errors. Blessings, Teri Keep on writing you two!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hi Teri! Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 8 of Love Long Distance. So glad you enjoyed it and feel it is very well written with great descriptive words and dialogue. Your comments are so kind! Chapter 9 is currently in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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you are so welcome. I enjoy your work! great writers. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Earl Corp
I hope Cathy kicks the nurse's ass, she knew Bill was taken but she Kept pushing. Bill better wise up too, but im sure grandpa will set him straight. I can't wait to read the next installment.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I hope Cathy kicks the nurse's ass, she knew Bill was taken but she Kept pushing. Bill better wise up too, but im sure grandpa will set him straight. I can't wait to read the next installment.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hi Earl! Your comments made us laugh! Good answer! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem. Also, we really appreciate your continued support. Chapter 9 is in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Yeah. That nurse would've been a patient when I got through with her. The nerve! LOL. I'm not really the violent type. I probably would have just paid a visit to the Hospital Administrator's office and had her reassigned to either the geriatric or the psyche ward. Either way Bill would be someone she never saw again! LOL Still kidding. I couldn't resist. I love every installment of this that I read. I can already see the movie in my mind's eye! Well Done!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Yeah. That nurse would've been a patient when I got through with her. The nerve! LOL. I'm not really the violent type. I probably would have just paid a visit to the Hospital Administrator's office and had her reassigned to either the geriatric or the psyche ward. Either way Bill would be someone she never saw again! LOL Still kidding. I couldn't resist. I love every installment of this that I read. I can already see the movie in my mind's eye! Well Done!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hi Brenda! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME 6-star rating and review. We are HONORED! Love your suggestions about reassigning the nurse! LOL Truth be told, Cathy isn't really the violent type, either, so what has gotten into her!! Bill must just bring out the best in her! :) We are thrilled that you enjoying Love Long Distance and we really appreciate your support. Chapter 9 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & cahty
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You're very welcome! I've already got my popcorn!
Comment from Gail Denham
This does sound like an old movie scene - fighting over their man - him in the hospital bed, eyeing the nurse's attributes. A lot of melodrama for a man who's only there for a short while. Strange nurse.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This does sound like an old movie scene - fighting over their man - him in the hospital bed, eyeing the nurse's attributes. A lot of melodrama for a man who's only there for a short while. Strange nurse.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hi Gail! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Yes, a lot of melodrama. And the nurse is rather strange. We'll see what happens to her next. Chapter 9 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
Cathy sure has a temper when it comes to her man. Doing what she did, the nurse deserves what she gets, and so does Bill with his roaming eyes. It's well-written, very interesting, realistic start to finish, of course.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Cathy sure has a temper when it comes to her man. Doing what she did, the nurse deserves what she gets, and so does Bill with his roaming eyes. It's well-written, very interesting, realistic start to finish, of course.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hi Mistydawn! A BIG THANK YOU for the AWESOME 6-star rating and review! We are HONORED! Glad you found this well-written, interesting and realistic. We'll see what happens to the nurse, and also to Bill in the next chapter. It is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Good for Cathy! That was no way for a nurse to act, and I hope she gets the sack when the doctors hear what happened. I would have done what Cathy did, and then given Bill a ... what did Grampa say? Thashed his tail!! LOL. He would deserve it too! What a great chapter, Cathy, you wrote this so well. I can't wait to read what happened next. Let it be a warning to Bill!! LOL. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Good for Cathy! That was no way for a nurse to act, and I hope she gets the sack when the doctors hear what happened. I would have done what Cathy did, and then given Bill a ... what did Grampa say? Thashed his tail!! LOL. He would deserve it too! What a great chapter, Cathy, you wrote this so well. I can't wait to read what happened next. Let it be a warning to Bill!! LOL. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Sandra! Bill sure is getting in trouble, and he'd better start behaving! Only question is...can he? :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Love your comments! Chapter 9 is already in the works and coming soon. We're thrilled you are following along!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from the13thpoet
A happy Monday morning to you Tootie. I think I may have grandpa flirty gene as well. lol. Funny story, very entertaining, who doesn't enjoy a good cat fight? Good job, can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A happy Monday morning to you Tootie. I think I may have grandpa flirty gene as well. lol. Funny story, very entertaining, who doesn't enjoy a good cat fight? Good job, can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi 13th Poet! Happy Monday to you, too! Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 8 of Love Long Distance. Glad you found it funny and entertaining. Also, that you enjoyed the cat fight! :) We are thrilled you will be continuing to follow along. Chapter 9 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Oh my! Jealousy is really a dangerous thing. The nurse should be reprimanded though since she started it with her suggestive behavior and knew perfectly well that hospital staff is NOT allowed to dally with the patients. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Oh my! Jealousy is really a dangerous thing. The nurse should be reprimanded though since she started it with her suggestive behavior and knew perfectly well that hospital staff is NOT allowed to dally with the patients. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Monica! Jealousy is dangerous all right! Yes, that nurse is out of line! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing Chapter 8 of Love Long Distance. Thank You! It is our pleasure to be able to share this book in the making on FanStory and appreciate all the support. So glad you are enjoying it. Chapter 9 is in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your collaborative chapter Cathy and Bill. The story is progressing well. This is an awesome chapter.
I like the focus of it as being entirely set in the hospital. However, it has many different tangents of interest. Readers learn more about each character through the dialogue, the flashbacks, and why each one acts as she or he does.
Cathy shows her anger in a way that many would--by lashing out at the unprofessional acting nurse. That nurse is a sad example of how to behave. Grandpa, as usual, takes things in stride and knows what to do in emergency situations when he breaks open the ammonia smelling reviver to get Cathy back on her feet. Also, he understands Bill better than anyone else. He cares deeply for Cathy, too. Bill's mother acts like I believe most mothers would--unable to deal with the situation at the time. And Cathy--a Tasmanian devil when it comes to her soulmate!
I like the flashback scenes to remind readers just where Bill came from and why his flamboyant personality is the defining part of him, as has been all his life. It is great to read of the closeness of his family. I could go for one of those hot biscuits right about now.
You ended at a crucial point to draw readers back. I found the videos interesting that remind readers of the time period this novel is set. I don't know either one and only watched a few minutes of both, but I will come back later.
Thank you Cathy & Bill for sharing an excellent chapter in this most interesting novel. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed your collaborative chapter Cathy and Bill. The story is progressing well. This is an awesome chapter.
I like the focus of it as being entirely set in the hospital. However, it has many different tangents of interest. Readers learn more about each character through the dialogue, the flashbacks, and why each one acts as she or he does.
Cathy shows her anger in a way that many would--by lashing out at the unprofessional acting nurse. That nurse is a sad example of how to behave. Grandpa, as usual, takes things in stride and knows what to do in emergency situations when he breaks open the ammonia smelling reviver to get Cathy back on her feet. Also, he understands Bill better than anyone else. He cares deeply for Cathy, too. Bill's mother acts like I believe most mothers would--unable to deal with the situation at the time. And Cathy--a Tasmanian devil when it comes to her soulmate!
I like the flashback scenes to remind readers just where Bill came from and why his flamboyant personality is the defining part of him, as has been all his life. It is great to read of the closeness of his family. I could go for one of those hot biscuits right about now.
You ended at a crucial point to draw readers back. I found the videos interesting that remind readers of the time period this novel is set. I don't know either one and only watched a few minutes of both, but I will come back later.
Thank you Cathy & Bill for sharing an excellent chapter in this most interesting novel. Jan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Jan!
Cathy a Tasmanian devil? So funny! Thank you SO MUCH for this EXCEPTIONAL REVIEW and SHINY 6-star rating! A SALUTE! The details you share about the character traits of each is so accurate, and we greatly appreciate you sharing them. We're so glad you enjoyed this chapter and want to thank you, as well, for your continued support! Chapter 9 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Patty Palmer
Cathy sure is ticked off at Bill for flirting with the nurse (I for one am not happy to see a nurse act this way..LOL I'm a nurse and we don't act like that. She would be fired~) So we've come to a cat fight! I enjoyed yet again another chapter of Love Long Distance!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Cathy sure is ticked off at Bill for flirting with the nurse (I for one am not happy to see a nurse act this way..LOL I'm a nurse and we don't act like that. She would be fired~) So we've come to a cat fight! I enjoyed yet again another chapter of Love Long Distance!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Patty!
Stay tuned to find out what happens next. Of course, we agree (at least Cathy does) that the nurse should be fired! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We are glad you are following along and it means so much to us that you are enjoying the story. Chapter 9 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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Thanks guys!!
