Muse Of Love
Come read about my muse...22 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
Your verses are perfect. I think you have a good chance of winning with this one. And your muse is so simple, you're inspired by love. Best of luck.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Your verses are perfect. I think you have a good chance of winning with this one. And your muse is so simple, you're inspired by love. Best of luck.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you Cindy! I am so happy that you enjoyed and I greatly appreciate you leaving me this feedback!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Very nice mythological allusions. Thanks for including stuff in the author notes. I think my favorite lines were "enchanting thoughts - they have no end." And also "the spirit's splendor from above -" but that's coming perhaps from a religious perspective which isn't necessarily meant here. I guess everything creative we do is done better if done with love, which the last line seems to indicate. Pretty and exotic choice of art, too! Not sure what to fix. Is there a way to do dashes where some of the small hyphens are? In Microsoft Word I have to do two hyphens and then an extra letter, then hit enter, then back space again over the extra letter, just to get a dash that stands out.
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Very nice mythological allusions. Thanks for including stuff in the author notes. I think my favorite lines were "enchanting thoughts - they have no end." And also "the spirit's splendor from above -" but that's coming perhaps from a religious perspective which isn't necessarily meant here. I guess everything creative we do is done better if done with love, which the last line seems to indicate. Pretty and exotic choice of art, too! Not sure what to fix. Is there a way to do dashes where some of the small hyphens are? In Microsoft Word I have to do two hyphens and then an extra letter, then hit enter, then back space again over the extra letter, just to get a dash that stands out.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks Crystie! I work from an iPhone but I was able to go and add that extra Dash so it looks longer! Thank you so much for stopping and leaving me your kind feedback! xoxo