Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Great job, nicely done on the tyburn with these four rhyming words made two good lines that describe a scene in baseball. good luck on the contest and have a great day

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thank you for your very kind comments in review of my poem, William. I appreciate your time to read and share your comments. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Puts me in the mood for baseball season, author. I have just about had enough of the winter doldrums and everything that goes with them. Good job, my friend. ??Bob

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Bob, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments, and pitchers and catchers report to spring training in about a month!
Smiles
Karyn :-)

reply by Mastery on 18-Jan-2019

Hi, Karyn. I miss you and your writing. Have you quit basically or just slowed down? :) Bob

Comment from Gracie619

Excellent

What a fun poem that put me mentally in a warm ballpark in much nicer weather than January is pitching our way. Great subject matter and cute artwork. Good luck to you in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

I'm so pleased you found some fun in this poem, Gracie. Thank you for your kind comments and for taking the time to write a review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job on your word selections. They aptly describe what could, and many times, happen. The picture is a great pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks, Jan, for your kind comments in review of my poem. I appreciate your taking the time to read and write a review, and I'm delighted you enjoyed it.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Mystery Poet!
Love your Tyburn poem! These little buggers are challenging to compose! Well, at least they are for me! Yours flows so well, makes sense, and is a wonderful exampleof the form! Kudos!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Diane, for taking the time to read and write a review for my poem. This is quite a challenging form for me as well, so I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comments.
Smiles
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Author,

Thank you for sharing your cute Tyburn poem with us. I wish you luck with this in the contest. Your tale of the pitcher resonates with those of us who watch the pitches in all kinds of baseball - middle school, high school, and college. (I have zero interest in pro baseball.)

Good luck to you in the contest,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019

Thank you for tour kind review and comments for my poem, Mustang Patty. I very much appreciate your feedback. Thanks!

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

I am not a baseball fan but I can sense the excitement of a crowd going "wild'. The verbs communicate unceasing activity and the wording goes along with the play

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019

Thank you, Donka, for your time to read my poem and to write your kind review and omments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

The passion for the game is in every word here and I loved the aliteration and you win my vote with this unique and clever poem, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019

Thank you for this great review for my poem and your kind comments, Dolly. I appreciate tour time to offer feedback.

Comment from Spitfire

Exceptional

A favorite theme that rings true, I'm sure. Great choice of verbs that make sense in the last two lines. Fans can be obnoxious for sure. And people hate change.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019

Your generous rating, kind review, and encouraging comments are appreciated very much, Shari. Thank you so much!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Tyburn poem about the crowd that goes wild when the rookie change his pitching style and makes a difference in the ending score, sometimes we need to take a dirrerent approach.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019

Thank you for this great review for my poem and your kind comments, Sandra. I appreciate tour time to offer feedback.