Falling Rain
A Nonet56 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
I am OUT of sixes! GRRRRR! This is fantastic. The whole overall effect is stunning, the visual with your Nonet. If it was hard for you, you didn't show it. It flows beautifully and rather falls together, much like falling rain! :) It is lovely. I would think with the unique choice of topic and the way you put it together poetically in such a beautiful way that you would do very well with this one. I hope so!
Great Job and Good Luck!
Sincerely,
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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I am OUT of sixes! GRRRRR! This is fantastic. The whole overall effect is stunning, the visual with your Nonet. If it was hard for you, you didn't show it. It flows beautifully and rather falls together, much like falling rain! :) It is lovely. I would think with the unique choice of topic and the way you put it together poetically in such a beautiful way that you would do very well with this one. I hope so!
Great Job and Good Luck!
Sincerely,
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, with wonderful reviews like this sixer are not nessecary****kahpot
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO KAHPOT: I like your poem here in that it makes me see, and feel what you are saying here. I can feel your rain. I can see your sunlight. You have written a rainbow in your message here. This poem expresses the beauty of the work of mother nature. In that it is good. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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HELLO KAHPOT: I like your poem here in that it makes me see, and feel what you are saying here. I can feel your rain. I can see your sunlight. You have written a rainbow in your message here. This poem expresses the beauty of the work of mother nature. In that it is good. Thank you for sharing. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes I thought the rainbow might be a good touch****kahpot
Comment from TheStoryMan
This is a well written poem. I've never tried this form before, I may study it and give it a try in the future. Your poem certainly describes how nature behaves in a continuous cycle. Good luck in your contest!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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This is a well written poem. I've never tried this form before, I may study it and give it a try in the future. Your poem certainly describes how nature behaves in a continuous cycle. Good luck in your contest!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes have a go they are fun****kahpot
Comment from estory
Nice exercise in the format, and the use of form to create a feel, in this case, of rain falling in your face. The ever tightening lines give us that sense of a rhythm speeding up, a force drawing us down. The images work with it to round out the theme. estory
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Nice exercise in the format, and the use of form to create a feel, in this case, of rain falling in your face. The ever tightening lines give us that sense of a rhythm speeding up, a force drawing us down. The images work with it to round out the theme. estory
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, it was a fun excercise****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well crafted nonet that shows the rejuvenating power of rain to nature. I like that it rhymes which probably made it more of a challenge to write.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This is a well crafted nonet that shows the rejuvenating power of rain to nature. I like that it rhymes which probably made it more of a challenge to write.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes a bit of a challenge but fun****kahpot
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My pleasure
dp
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My pleasure
dp
Comment from Marc Grimaldi
Very pleasant and delightful poem. The Nonet countdown is really good. It flows smoothly and the rhyme scheme works nice. Nothing seems forced. Keep up the good writing!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Very pleasant and delightful poem. The Nonet countdown is really good. It flows smoothly and the rhyme scheme works nice. Nothing seems forced. Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from LIJ Red
If only one could beat a nonet into iambic meter, I would say it is one of the better styles, and end rhymes add to the poem, with a minor bonus for a pure isosceles text...excellent nonet.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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If only one could beat a nonet into iambic meter, I would say it is one of the better styles, and end rhymes add to the poem, with a minor bonus for a pure isosceles text...excellent nonet.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes beating it would be a great way****kahpot
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a lovely nonet poem and you are right, it is hard to write. IA perfect picture to compliment your poem. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This is a lovely nonet poem and you are right, it is hard to write. IA perfect picture to compliment your poem. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes hard but fun****kahpot
Comment from royowen
This is a fine Nonet, and an excellent entry in this Nonet poetry contest Kahpot. Yes, evaporation is nature's washing machine, the process purifies the water, as the seas will eventually cleanse even oil spills, plastics are another matter. Well done, an excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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This is a fine Nonet, and an excellent entry in this Nonet poetry contest Kahpot. Yes, evaporation is nature's washing machine, the process purifies the water, as the seas will eventually cleanse even oil spills, plastics are another matter. Well done, an excellent entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, yes the plastic is a big problem, very much appreciate your review, many thanks****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, kahpot, with your nonet contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like your use of rhyme, too. Your words flow smoothly and tell a great story of the water cycle. Your picture is super. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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You did a great job, kahpot, with your nonet contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Good job on the syllable count per line. I like your use of rhyme, too. Your words flow smoothly and tell a great story of the water cycle. Your picture is super. Good job and thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much, had to make a few alterations, but it was still fun****kahpot