Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Who could have changed history to lose a war??? Surely not Veronica or her friends. And why would it change unless someone was messing with history, like those powers that be? I don't trust them. I don't trust anyone with so much power.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Phyllis!! :)) That is exactly what Veronica wants to know. What happened? Where is James and her children? Something is very wrong. Can she fix it? :( Next part on Sunday. (I'm taking a leaf out of your book and will try to post more often.) Big hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi, Sandra, this is getting complicated. The time travelling is really getting in the way. Poor Mildred is in one time but Veronica has all the knowledge of what really happened. Oh dear. What on earth next. Sorry, I've no six left to give this wonderful writing. A big hug. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Veronica has got to get a grip on what has happened. More questions are going round her head, but who has the answers? Thank you so much, my friend, for the lovely review. 6s are lovely, but your review is more important. Big hugs, Sandra. xxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Wow, this was a fantastic chapter Sandra, it sure answered a lot of loose questions about the new reality for Veronica. I am not convinced though that she and the others had not been able to promote the changes that had happened in her old reality. Little Alice has to live as do James, Ann and Michael. This was great to read and well plotted out. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

What a lovely review, Alie, thank you so very much! Veronica doesn't know which way to turn now. More questions and more answers coming, but will they help her? Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by aryr on 29-Nov-2018

You are so welcome Sandra, I really enjoy your writing it is full of suspense, mystery and intrigue.

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh my. Things are very messed up. What happened? I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter or two or three to find out. Poor Veronica. ={ Well done as always. Rox

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, Rox. Veronica is in a pickle, she needs more answers to her many questions, but will they get her back to her own timeline? Hmm. More coming on Sunday! Big hugs, my friend.:) Sandra xxx

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Great installment in this story - what a situation to have all that change all at once! Great pacing, deep POV, dialog and characterization...as usual.

A few nits:

*How could I put into words that this reality wasn't mine, and never could be(,) without James and our children in it.(?) That history had inexplicably changed(,) and the world as she knew it was so drastically different from mine.

*Flashback is one word, I think:

A flash back to when she fell down the dark cellar stairs

*My thoughts dallied there as I remembered the ghost of Lady Ann,(no ,) and the things we did to her low-life, murdering husband, Sir John.

GOOD CLOSING NOTE:

What's changed? If only she knew. Everything's changed, including a war that should never have been lost...


Waiting to see what happens next!...

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thank you so much for another helpful review, Rama. I really appreciate it, as you know. I've ,made the corrections. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by rama devi on 28-Nov-2018

:)) xxoo

Comment from alexisleech

Exceptional

I can imagine it's not easy trying to explain what's going on to new readers, especially when the change to history also means changes to your previous two books in the trilogy - well done! You momentarily took me back to the first book and the twists and turns that made it such a terrific read.

Soooo looking forward to the next chapter!

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Aww, thank you so much, Alexis, for the fabulous six stars. Your review is spot on, it's going to be really hard, but it should all make sense later. Biggest hugs, my friend! :)) xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

I am as confused as Mildred. I know you have a plan, but I just can't think what this has to do with the suffrage movement and all that. It boggles the mind and makes one wonder what if? Don't keep us waiting too long. LOL Nancy:)
xxx

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

In a way it's good you can't think what it is, or the mystery will be blown! LOL. This is part one of two parts for this chapter, I'll post the next part on Sunday. Thank you so much, my dear friend, I'm so pleased you are following the story. Biggest hugs. Sandra xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm not sure why you've taken Veronica off into another parrallel universe, but tends to breat the other story you've been on in the inconclusive sphere, Sandra, my thoughts have taken a twist too. Undoubtedly all will become clear. Well done, imaginative writing my friend, blessings, Roy

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

. All will become very clear shortly, Roy, then you will all understand, as will Veronica. Poor Mildred doesn't even know Veronica is a time-traveller! This is part one of two, it would have been much too long to post the whole of this chapter. The next part will be up on Sunday after I've edited and done a lot of reviewing. Thank you so much, my friend, for your lovely review. Big hugs, Sandra xxx :))

reply by royowen on 28-Nov-2018

I knew you had a plan Sandta.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Oh no, that's not good at all. I hope they can figure out how to fix it. it's very well-written, interesting, the dialogue seems real and the characters really comes to life.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

---

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thank you for reading this part, Misty. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Big hugs, Sandra xx