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Down the rabbit hole

Time travel isn't always fun

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Comment from fm wright
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A very fascinating piece of prose and a great entry for the Sentence Starts the Story contest. I like it in that I was drawn in immediately and was with it to the end. A truly wonderful read and I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
reply by fm wright on 30-Aug-2018
    You are kindly welcome.
Comment from Therese103
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Well, this is a very well-written, smoothly flowing story, historically accurate with the contest theme in mind! Well done! welcome to Fanstory, and I look forward to seeing more of your work! Blessings, Therese103

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thank you for your kind words. I'm working on another piece for the Share your Story Contest. The hardest thing I found about this contest was coming up with a title.
reply by Therese103 on 30-Aug-2018
    Funny! I often find the title the hardest part too!