Comment from
Gloria ....
Well I don't think this is offensive at all, Craig. In fact it's mostly sensible whinging and complaining from a crotchety person who clearly has no taste for the finer annoyances in life with one possible exception, well two, the screamers in the theatre and the gum under foot.
Super job and most entertaining, and the moose antlers coming out of Buddy's ears in the picture enhances the entire poem perfectly.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
Thanks very much, Gloria, for the lovely stars and the fun comments. All those stanzas for one little word lol
Cheers,
Craig