Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Sandra, very nicely done... Congratulations by the way for being published. You have set us up for the next chapter. If you want you can tell me if Mildred... I won't tell another soul. yours, di

 Comment Written 16-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

Hi, Di, thank you so much for reading this part. I'm afraid it will be a few weeks before you get to read on, this was the end of this book, and leads onto the third book. I hope you will join me with their next adventure! Thank you for the congrats! :)) Sandra. xxx

reply by Artasylum on 16-May-2018

Well Sandra... read on I will. Yours, diana

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I liked the way you ended this. Mildred is still an important part of Veronica's life and that's really good. I know she will be a lot of help in Veronica's time travel. I am wondering who will help with the children?

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

Thank you, Barbara, for your wonderful review, and constant support. You've always been so kind. The children won't suffer at all, because V and M will be returned at exactly the same time they left, just like this book, so they will never be left on their own. In her own time, Veronica will be just like any other stay at home mum. Thanks again, my friend! Warm hugs. Sandra xxxx

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Sandra, awesome ending sweet girl...now we will have Mildred and Veronica...The Ghost Whisperers...I just couldn't see Mildred dying...I mean this family is like Bewitched...all kinds of surprises...stand and take a bow my sweet friend...you deserve it...will make an awesome book...I am honored to have a wonderful friend like you...very well written....love you so lots...Linda xxoo

I hope Ian has been reading it...all my best to him...and say hi for me...xxoo

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

AWw, thank you, Linda. I'm glad you liked it. I had no intention of getting rid of Mildred, but she was getting old and couldn't have gone on as she was. This way, everyone will know she is a 'special' member of the group, just like Veronica and Ann. Who knows what will happen in the future? (or the past!) It's going to be fun finding out. Love you lots too, dear friend. Sandra xxxxxx

reply by l.raven on 16-May-2018

well!!! let me see...if you can make Mildred younger...do you have a minute???...I don't mind fading in and out for some youth...LOL...can't wait to see what will happen...love you sweet girl...sooooo much...Linda xxoo

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Oh, boy! We're still going to have Mildred around. I'm so much happier now. I knew you wouldn't just kill her off completely.

I was right there with Veronica in her grief. Thank goodness, they'll still be together some.

I'm already looking forward to the next book, so get a move on, girl. lol

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

LOL, Yvonne, I'll be starting the next book soon, just get this one sorted. I'm over the moon at the reception the ending has been for this one, and I'm really happy you enjoyed it too. Thank you so much for another 6 stars, dear friend, you've been wonderful all the way through. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xxx

reply by damommy on 16-May-2018

If I gave wonderful reviews, it's because it was a tremendously good story. Well deserved!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What a wonderful ending Sandra, now Veronica will be overjoyed to have her friend and companion with her, changing lives, promoting people into happier futures. In your fantasy you have created the perfect quest for others, this is really an allegory for what God wants ffor us to really do, see what writkng does. Well done, Sandra, extra well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Aww, Bless your lovely heart, Roy, thank you so very much for this lovely review. I couldn't let Mildred go, but she was far to old to go galloping back in time. Those Powers that be, knew it and sorted it out. lol. I love what you put about it being what God really wants us to do. I think you're right. Just be nice to people, put happiness into other's lives, what could be nicer? Thank you again, my dear friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx

reply by royowen on 15-May-2018

Well done Sandra, it's your heart's desire that created this.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Sandra. What a wonderful chapter this is. Great imagery and descriptive language: Like here: " I couldn't breathe as invisible hands squeezed my neck, wringing it like an old dishcloth, filling my head with unbearable pain ... but I didn't care--it was better than the anguish that was ripping my heart apart."

Wow!
You also capture pathos so well, like here: " I then stroked her face, my tears spilling onto her hair."



Outstsnding, my friend.Sorry to see it is over for now.LOL

Suggestions: Something to remember for the future if you don't mind.When describing something use no more than two adjectives..Like here:

"I could hear her voice scold me in that mischievous, wonderful, quirky way of hers. (always pick the best two and then use the other later onif necessary.

GoodLuck with your next adventure in writing. (Itfeelslike you ahve lost an old friend when you leve a book, doesn't it?) XX Bob

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

What a lovely review, Bob, thank you so much. I took one of the adjectives out, leaving just the two. That was a very helpful piece of information, I will be remembering that! I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of this part, Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

reply by Mastery on 15-May-2018

XX same to you,Sandra. Bless you.Bob

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Okay, I don't know HOW I feel now....

YOU are a wickedly good writer, Miss Sandra.

Still, you've put me through the wringer today...

What a lovely very end ending.

But before that, you put me through hell.

Bah, I'm so confused!!!

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Go and lie down on your couch, and you can tell me all about it. lol. This is another amazingly funny review, and I love them. Thank you, my friend, for another 6 stars as well, you really are a kind lady! Big hugs. Sandra xxxxx

Comment from write hand blue

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, magnificent, a rendering of the human spirit as Miss Veronica comes to face the death of a loved one. A totally authentic example of the type of grief felt for Mildrid. I like the description and everything you put into this emotional write.
I think you have excelled yourself here. You have left a great hook to pull us all back to the third book. You are one of my favorite writers on this site always impeccably nice and technically brilliant. Here is some more... GOOD LUCK. (can't have too much) LOL
I wish you and your family the very best.

~Mel~

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 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

What a lovely compliment, thank you so much, Mel. I'm glad you enjoyed this ending, and the lead into the next book. I'm going to have fun with Mildred time travelling with Veronica. :)) Thank you for the lovely 6 stars, too, my friend, you've put a big smile on my face with this review! Big hugs, :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Ric Myworld

Exceptional

Well, its been a bumpy ride, but I must say, I've enjoyed every minute of it. Wishing that I too could flash in and out of a particular place and time. But, since I can't, what better way than to follow along with Veronica and Mildred. Thanks for sharing. :-)

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so much, Ric, what a lovely review. I'm so very pleased you enjoyed this ending. You have been so supportive throughout this book. Thank you! Sandra xxxx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Oh, Sandra, is this the end of book number two? What a lovely ending and of course I should have known better. It's a perfect place to end, and we now know that Veronica and Mildred(as a ghost) are going to have so much fun together. We won't loose her after all. I was devastated when I realised she'd died.
A suggestion: I have to stop this ... but I can't. = I think you either have to put this in italics as it's inner thoughts, or you can overcome that by writing in the past tense: I had to stop this ... but I couldn't.
Sandra please start posting part three soon. But I take it you'll have a lot of editing to do. Big hugs. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thank you so very much for another 6 stars, my friend. And another big thank you for the lovely review I've changed that sentence into italics, for inner thoughts. Thanks for pointing that out, my friend, I normally do that, but I think I'd read it so many times my brain just decided to tick it off as done. lol. I couldn't take her out of the story all together, she is a big part of the book, but she'd been there since the second world war and was getting a bit old now. Thanks again, my friend, for all the support you have given me through the months reading my book. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

reply by Ulla on 15-May-2018

Oh, I understand, I can't wait fot the third book. Of course Mildred needs to be part of it! Ulla xxx