Comment from
Sharon Haiste
I love your word of the day 'zawn' and your verse is a lively and well written piece.
The rhyming is excellent.
Well done and thank you for sharing another amazing word with us.
Sharon
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
Thanks for the kind review, much appreciated. Craig
Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the ship crashed in the rocky wall of the cave, at safe arrival the man gets comforts and warmth of his love; octave, sestet, resolution and word usage well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
Thanks for the kind comments - much appreciated, Craig