Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahaha.
Is it okay for me to tell you that I feel extremely sorry for your wife, Bill? Or would that be out of line on my part?
I can make both last for a very long, looooooooooooooooong time, no problem.
Where money is concerned, I have little choice as I'm on a fixed income.
But making love is lots'a fun, so I make it last out of sheer delight and pleasure.
Congrats on your win.
Good luck to you in all your future endeavors.
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thanks Dean for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day.

reply by Dean Kuch on 21-Feb-2018

You are welcome, Bill.
You do he same.~Dean

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

This is an absolutely great 5-7-5 poem. I am not surprised that it won. Congratulations.
I really love the humour and the expressive picture. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you very much, Jen, for your wonderful and kind review. I really appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Congratulations on winning this contest. You have a good picture and message combination. Your aha moment was fun. Not quite a knee slapper, but I'm sure a lot of readers can relate.

Joy

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you. I'm sorry it wasn't a "knee-slapper." Those are hard to come by...Bill

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

lol, This is a great senryu poem, my friend. Congratulations on the win!
It had great humor in it:) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Hello Kerry: Thanks for your great review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you laugh. Have a wonderful day my friend...Bill

reply by Kerry Foley on 21-Feb-2018

You're welcome:)

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Very clever. A joy to read on a rainy morning. This is certainly a truth-telling senyru. No doubt the narrator's wife appreciates his other fine qualities. Excellent metaphor that you used. Your syllable count is the required 5-7-5. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. judi

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you, Judi, for your excellent review. I appreciate it. Have a blessed day my friend...Bill

reply by judiverse on 20-Feb-2018

You're very welcome. What a fun read. judi

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I find it lasts longer if you convert it all to pennies - the money, that is. Useful at my age to have a few pennies in the pocket, in case I need to spend one. As for the other problem, I'm afraid I can't offer any help.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend...Bill

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Hahahaha...good one, very funny. I like the picture you chose also. You definitely deserved to win, congratulations.I'm sure that many men can relate to that situation. Thanks for the laugh.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you, my friend, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you laugh. Take care...Bill

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

Wow, this is a funny and cute little poem. The message is clear throughout. I also like the quirky look on the man's face in the artwork. Very well done.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you, Jeffrey, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Well done for the win. I had to smile for this one. I have heard similar, but liked this.
Good to see a bit of humour.
My very best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you, RG, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you smile. Cheers...Bill

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi true none last long, but the man is always there to make more money which does not last long again. It is a vicious circle. As long as you are there to make the money enjoy yourself while you last.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you, Danny, for your excellent review. I agree with you Danny, it is a vicious circle that just keeps turning. Have a great day my friend. Cheers...Bill