The Tiny Leaf
Perserverence41 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
What a sweet little write Yvonne I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Just thought I'd let you know I am leaving Fanstory indefinitely. I physically can't keep up with reviewing anymore. I am tired. After four and a half years of posting 2 poems a night that equates to some 3700 poems, I am losing my mojo and impetus Maybe absence will make the heart grow fonder.
I will still post occasionally but I will not be reviewing anymore so leaving is probably not a good word. I think people are tiring of my rhyming poetry of mainly love and romance and I don't blame them, there are enough of them that's for sure! lol
Thanks for being a great fanstory friend
dip
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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What a sweet little write Yvonne I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Just thought I'd let you know I am leaving Fanstory indefinitely. I physically can't keep up with reviewing anymore. I am tired. After four and a half years of posting 2 poems a night that equates to some 3700 poems, I am losing my mojo and impetus Maybe absence will make the heart grow fonder.
I will still post occasionally but I will not be reviewing anymore so leaving is probably not a good word. I think people are tiring of my rhyming poetry of mainly love and romance and I don't blame them, there are enough of them that's for sure! lol
Thanks for being a great fanstory friend
dip
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Oh, I am sorry to hear that. Maybe a break is all you need. I'll miss you, so hurry back.
As for keeping up with reviewing, it is hard. Unfortunately, I never have so many reviews to keep up with. lol
Thank you for being my friend here, and I hope to see you back SOON.
Comment from Gloria ....
What a perfect metaphor to illustrate the rewards that come from persistence, even though sometimes going with the flow is just the thing.
This is just so good Yvonne and I always love a happy ending. Spring is coming. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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What a perfect metaphor to illustrate the rewards that come from persistence, even though sometimes going with the flow is just the thing.
This is just so good Yvonne and I always love a happy ending. Spring is coming. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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I do, too. Enough sadness without writing about it. I'm always happy you receive your review. Thank you so much.
Comment from Chrissy710
Oh damommy. This is a gorgeous poem and beautifully rhymed with true rhymes and excellent meter. Well worth the read and I am sorry I have no sixes so a big well done a lovely story and I hope you win Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Oh damommy. This is a gorgeous poem and beautifully rhymed with true rhymes and excellent meter. Well worth the read and I am sorry I have no sixes so a big well done a lovely story and I hope you win Cheers Christine
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thank you. I'm just glad you liked it that much. I appreciate the good wishes. We'll see. Thanks again.
Comment from MelB
Hi Yvonne, this is a fun poem! I enjoyed reading it. You made the little leaf come to life. Very nice aabb rhyme, rhythm, and flow. The artwork is a perfect compliment.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Hi Yvonne, this is a fun poem! I enjoyed reading it. You made the little leaf come to life. Very nice aabb rhyme, rhythm, and flow. The artwork is a perfect compliment.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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What a nice thing to say. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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You're most welcome:)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello damommy, The Little Leaf reminds me of "The Little Train That Could" ... both of them never gave up. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your verses were silky smooth as was the rhyming.
Good alliteration throughout, especially:
While twisting this way, turning that, there came a great big gust.
Lovely complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Six stars for you. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Hello damommy, The Little Leaf reminds me of "The Little Train That Could" ... both of them never gave up. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your verses were silky smooth as was the rhyming.
Good alliteration throughout, especially:
While twisting this way, turning that, there came a great big gust.
Lovely complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Six stars for you. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Oh, my goodness. Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it that much. Thank you for the lovely comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Such a sweet story from a common sight in winter! I like the anthropomorphic qualities you gave the leaves. Actually, at first, I was expecting the opposite - that the leaf would be encouraged to keep hanging on until spring. There was a story about a sick child who thought she die when the last leaf fell from the tree in the yard. Her sister tied a fake leaf to the tree and so gave hope to live through that winter.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Such a sweet story from a common sight in winter! I like the anthropomorphic qualities you gave the leaves. Actually, at first, I was expecting the opposite - that the leaf would be encouraged to keep hanging on until spring. There was a story about a sick child who thought she die when the last leaf fell from the tree in the yard. Her sister tied a fake leaf to the tree and so gave hope to live through that winter.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this lovely review. What a sweet story you told me about the sick child. Thank you.
Comment from Cheryl I
This is a darling story of the little leaf that could. :) It always amazes me to see a leaf or two on a tree, seemingly holding on for dear life. Now I know what's really going on! lol Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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This is a darling story of the little leaf that could. :) It always amazes me to see a leaf or two on a tree, seemingly holding on for dear life. Now I know what's really going on! lol Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I'm glad I could educate you. lol
Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is really cute, Damommy :) I wish I had a six for you, but I'm all out. You have lovely rhythmic lines from beginning to end in lovely meter. I enjoyed your aabb rhyme scheme and was impressed that they were well placed rhymes. Nothing felt forced at all. This is absolutely adorable.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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This is really cute, Damommy :) I wish I had a six for you, but I'm all out. You have lovely rhythmic lines from beginning to end in lovely meter. I enjoyed your aabb rhyme scheme and was impressed that they were well placed rhymes. Nothing felt forced at all. This is absolutely adorable.
Joy xx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you. What lovely compliments.
Comment from Dawn Munro
A simple poem? Just for fun? A BRILLIANT POEM, IF YOU ASK ME. The concept is charming, and highly creative, the meter perfect, as is the rhyme - THIS, my dear, is poetry at its finest, in my opinion! I loved it, Yvonne! You take my last six this week.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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A simple poem? Just for fun? A BRILLIANT POEM, IF YOU ASK ME. The concept is charming, and highly creative, the meter perfect, as is the rhyme - THIS, my dear, is poetry at its finest, in my opinion! I loved it, Yvonne! You take my last six this week.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Awww, how sweet. Thank you so much.
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You're very welcome. Well-earned: you are so humble!!!!!
Comment from Teri7
I really enjoyed this poem about the little leaf that finally made his destination. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the great art work and words! love, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed this poem about the little leaf that finally made his destination. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the great art work and words! love, Teri
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
