Perennials of War
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great chapter, and I really liked it. So there's a big conflict going on between Anderson and his ex wife. it doesn't look good at all. And now, what about the Russians?
All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Hi Barbara, this is a great chapter, and I really liked it. So there's a big conflict going on between Anderson and his ex wife. it doesn't look good at all. And now, what about the Russians?
All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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The Russians are on hold for a few minutes. LOl Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I see you are writing about a very emotional and intense situation if Patricia is an unfit mother for Emily.
What did you miss, you didn't tell us much about what the ( pile of political red-tape.)
Gert
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Hello Barb
I see you are writing about a very emotional and intense situation if Patricia is an unfit mother for Emily.
What did you miss, you didn't tell us much about what the ( pile of political red-tape.)
Gert
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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No I didn''t because all that's important to the story is to know it happened. Thank you for the kind review.
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I understand Barb what you said
because all that's important to the story is to know it happened
Gert
Comment from Sankey
Good chapter once again. Looking forward, as usual to where this is all going. Great story all around. Not sure about the following?? "Remember my call to [the?] California?"
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Good chapter once again. Looking forward, as usual to where this is all going. Great story all around. Not sure about the following?? "Remember my call to [the?] California?"
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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I will fix that area. Thank you for the kind review.
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Did you see I put an old chapter of my biography up again you may have seen it before. We watched My Fair Lady and it made me realize I needed to edit this chapter as it related to that movie.
Comment from royowen
It looks things on the custody front are hotting up. Patricia sounds like, as a character, a real deadbeat. One wonders how a character as solid as Anderson is attracted to some like Pstricia, but he did say she was a trophy wife! Excellent episode Barbara, the story is really starting to connect, maybe he and Shana...? Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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It looks things on the custody front are hotting up. Patricia sounds like, as a character, a real deadbeat. One wonders how a character as solid as Anderson is attracted to some like Pstricia, but he did say she was a trophy wife! Excellent episode Barbara, the story is really starting to connect, maybe he and Shana...? Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Most welcome Barbara,
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is well written. I have missed so much of this story--I'll have to buy the book! Child abuse is such a problem--my son was molested by two of my ex's family members when he was four. There was no evidence and he was too young to testify.
Have a good week, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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This is well written. I have missed so much of this story--I'll have to buy the book! Child abuse is such a problem--my son was molested by two of my ex's family members when he was four. There was no evidence and he was too young to testify.
Have a good week, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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I'm glad you're back. I hope you can pick it up. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Jan Anderegg
A great chapter. Everything here moves the plot along. The interactions between characters feels real and the dialogue and descriptions were both excellent.
I would say something about the use of the cliche "at all costs" but it's within dialogue so...
All around very solid work. I found no errors or corrections needed.
Jan
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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A great chapter. Everything here moves the plot along. The interactions between characters feels real and the dialogue and descriptions were both excellent.
I would say something about the use of the cliche "at all costs" but it's within dialogue so...
All around very solid work. I found no errors or corrections needed.
Jan
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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I'm hoping it will work in dialogue. If somebody else, says something I will change it. Thank, you for the kind review.