Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (rolling green hills)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Nice play on words "ups and downs" to describe the hills.
Paints a clear picture of the scenery at Old Sacramento Park.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Nice play on words "ups and downs" to describe the hills.
Paints a clear picture of the scenery at Old Sacramento Park.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from robyn corum
hahaha!
Gypsy,
I love this! They do mimic life - those rolling hills, just like Life's incredibly high highs and those despondent lows. Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed so much!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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hahaha!
Gypsy,
I love this! They do mimic life - those rolling hills, just like Life's incredibly high highs and those despondent lows. Beautiful imagery. I enjoyed so much!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. My parents lived in a community named Hills and ZDales. The landscape fit. As does your poem. I can visualize the place. Just a few words, but it says a lot.
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This is very good. My parents lived in a community named Hills and ZDales. The landscape fit. As does your poem. I can visualize the place. Just a few words, but it says a lot.
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for reminding me of the years I spent in Sacramento--fortunately, mostly "ups". I liked your reinforcing the "green hills" with your background color choice. Cheers- Joan
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Thank you for reminding me of the years I spent in Sacramento--fortunately, mostly "ups". I liked your reinforcing the "green hills" with your background color choice. Cheers- Joan
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
gypsy hugs
Comment from nbonner
Our lives do seem like hills with our struggles going up and down like a rollercoaster. Thank you for sharing and best wishes
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Our lives do seem like hills with our struggles going up and down like a rollercoaster. Thank you for sharing and best wishes
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
gypsy
