Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku (dove flies)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think it will take a few doves to fly over President Trump. Dear me, he is stirring things up. Your Haiku is so good, Gypsy, it really does say everything. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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I think it will take a few doves to fly over President Trump. Dear me, he is stirring things up. Your Haiku is so good, Gypsy, it really does say everything. Well done, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Gypsy, I'd like to join The Haiku Club. This was a very nice haiku, the white lettering to me symbolizes peace, that the dove stands for, and the black, to me, symbolizes all the terror and turmoil our world is in that calls for peace. dove
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Dear Gypsy, I'd like to join The Haiku Club. This was a very nice haiku, the white lettering to me symbolizes peace, that the dove stands for, and the black, to me, symbolizes all the terror and turmoil our world is in that calls for peace. dove
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The dove being the symbol of peace and the problems at the White House that needs something...and the final line of the peace prayer. totally true and as far as I know, perfectly done.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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The dove being the symbol of peace and the problems at the White House that needs something...and the final line of the peace prayer. totally true and as far as I know, perfectly done.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much, Barb, you are very kind.
gypsy
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I have yet to write one that I don't have to correct.lol
