Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

an incredibly picturesque poem
even without the image the words create a shiver in ones memory of glorious evening moonlight sparkles on the water
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, smileycloud.
I appreciate your R&R.
Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

This is another great production Dean. The stars seen in the moving waters is a splendid scene. It is so soothing and comforting. There is peace in the photo that I can feel even when I close my eyes, after looking at it and I imagine myself there, in that peace and gorgeous scenery. I agree with your exceptional words for this haiku.

Even your haiku's are marvelous. REMARKABLE!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks very much for reading, TVK.
Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
~Dean

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A soft and serene Haiku filled with sparkling reflections of our shores, your Haiku gave me an image of my many images of the sea under the sun I have had the privilege to see all over the world, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks very much for reading, Dolly.
Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
~Dean

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

ahhh, the imagery of stars on a night-time lake gives pause for reflection of dreamy memories. It is a perfect accompaniment to the poem.
The 's' sound throughout the first two lines set the mood for softness and sweet, shimmering warmth on a no longer dark night.
Comforting, soothing thoughts. Beautiful.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks very much for reading, LaRosa.
Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
~Dean

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Nice!, really nice Now that is a really nice haiku and considering I am non-plus about them as a rule I liked this I think it was a combination of the dynamics of the image complimenting your words perfectly. well done you'll convert me yet. lol

dip

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks very much for reading, Doc.
Have yourself a great weekend.
~Deano

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

My goodness Dean, that artwork is mesmerising I can't take my eyes off it, your not some secret psychic are you, trying to control our minds.
Ummmm...enough of that,
A beautiful Haiku that marries with the said artwork so well, ....gotta to go and look at that shimmering sea some more.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, Mitchell. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

A beautiful pairing of poetry and art that conveys a picture of serenity. Awesome use of alliteration that appeals to both the eye and the ear. Just posted a request to Gypsy to add me to the group.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, Alice. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A well described haiku that is beautiful to read and to look at. Theme and presentation are tranquil and soothing with my favorite color--blue. Poem brims with alliteration of "s." Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, Marilyn. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Take care,
~Dean

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Awe, Cap'n Cook! Your words melt off hot butter. Your quill is dipped in octopus ink, your blase and mind is sharp, scurvy dog. Sea looks majestic, what an alliteration! Stars shines on shimmering seas and sand dollars, starfish, mermaids adrift on seaweed. Picture is captivating! BOO can grab 5 stars. next time will be the big dipper, savvy?



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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, Boo. I'm glad you enjoyed my haiku.
Take care, and have a great weekend.
~Spooky

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Wow and a very neat tongue twister at the same time. I so love the last line that ties it all together. You so have a wonderful way with words

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks, Barb.
Take care,
~Dean