Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Gypsy, :)

I love sunflower seeds. Now I am craving! :P LOL!

I don't think I did mine right; I added animals to the scene, so maybe I shouldn't have included it?

Have a great week!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

It's about flowers but it's okay to add animals. Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Gypsy, this is a fine summer Haiku that is concrete, vivid. You also use S alliteration. The satori evokes the sense of taste. Poem reminds me of Van Gogh's sunflowers painting.

Thank you for sharing your talents.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

Just talented!
You've penned this Haiku with a syllable count of 4-5-2
Sunflowers are beautiful.
The image shown supports the poem. The color of background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing another Haiku with us.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Guapa, this is a lovely haiku depicting the image of a sunflower field bowing their heads to the sun. I loved the satori line. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Hola guapa

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. First, love sunflowers. They seem to represent the sun and they soak up each sunray they can while in the fields on earth.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written Haiku. I think that the flow is amazing and alliteration is great throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are very talented. God bless you. With love, Lola

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, my friend Lola

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I see you haven't lost your Spanish identity. I don't think anybody else would see a snack when looking at a sunflower...
Lovely poem and great presentation.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017

Thank you, Maria Jose, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was really good, I love sunflower seeds and eat them as snacks or sprinkle them on my salads. Beautiful picture too. Well done, Gypsy, you met this flower challenge beautifully. :) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017

Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

This one is perfect and so true. My ex and I discussed the fields of sunflowers that he has never seen and said I was lying. Your imagery and then the warm snacks...for us later and the birds then.lol

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017

Thank you, Barb, I appreciate your warm and kind review.
gypsy