Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I like how you used nature imagery incorporated into you prayer haiku. Enveloped is a great word choice here:)

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Thank you, my friend :)
gypsy

Comment from Joycee

Excellent

Simple words with a lot of meaning. I like the simplicity of this piece. The picture shows deep thought of simple prayers that can be expressed anywhere.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Thank you, my friend :)
gypsy

Comment from apky

Excellent

Buffling.
Not the prayers,
not the amber light
signalling an eve,
but what the prayer is
prasing for.

And then I read that: We hired a professional graphic artist to complete the layout of this book. It has full-color haiga. The overall presentation is flawless and very appealing. It is a book that all of the FanStory can be proud of.

Gasp. Gasp again. And there's another book on the way.
Oh my.

Apky

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 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy hugs

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Correct form and a nicely written Haiku with topic appropriate art work. Seems like this should be such a simple form, just three lines and about 17 syllables. Don't know why my efforts seem to fall short. I saw your goal re: club challenge, kudos!

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 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, my friend :)
gypsy hugs