Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "senryu (lost her curly hair)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from royowen
The mental picture I received straight away was a young cancer sufferer, who's lost her hair because of treatment. That would explain the marvellous satori you have produced inspirationally Gypsy, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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The mental picture I received straight away was a young cancer sufferer, who's lost her hair because of treatment. That would explain the marvellous satori you have produced inspirationally Gypsy, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review, you are very kind, Roy.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute haiku you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I think I may eventually end up joining when the time is right with me! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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This is a very cute haiku you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I think I may eventually end up joining when the time is right with me! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello there friend I really enjoyed your Haiku 5 7-5 poem I think that it is nicely penned and it has a good flow throughout cool picture that complements this rather nicely thank you for sharing this
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Hello there friend I really enjoyed your Haiku 5 7-5 poem I think that it is nicely penned and it has a good flow throughout cool picture that complements this rather nicely thank you for sharing this
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, my friend.
Gypsy
