Comment from rspoet

Excellent

An excellent poem metaphor with images of sleep
from the dreams to the pillows stuffed with starlight
tossed and turned on oceans of time
A fine Etheree for the contest with correct syllables
and excellent art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks, RS . Glad you enjoyed the imagery and metaphor in this Etheree. Appreciate all your comments.
Cheers ... ;o) starkat

Comment from JanetRussek

Excellent

A wonderful piece. Wistful and beautiful at the same time. I read it several times. It left me wanting to read more. Looking forward to your next piece.
Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks, Janet. So glad you enjoyed this etheree. Appreciate your comments. Cheers .. ;o) Art

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you liked the imagery and word choices in this etheree. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;)

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Good

I quite enjoyed the topic and fantasy element .
As this is a contest entry you need to check the format for as I see it the formatting has gone wrong and it is not in correct syllable count.
I hope the contest deadline hasn't passed.
"-) Shirley

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 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this etheree. No other reviewers mentioned that the syllable count was in error, but it's good to double-check, anyway. Appreciate your comments ... ;)

reply by Shirley E Kennedy on 14-May-2017

Sorry, it's not that the syllable count is necessarily incorrect it is just the formatting when I view it has been distorted and pushed the the presentation out of shape.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very nicely written etheree poem as a great entry in this poetry contest, a qualifying entry with a good worthwhile theme, it looks like a very worthy post, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks, Roy. Glad you liked this etheree. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o) Art

reply by royowen on 14-May-2017

Most welcome

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Although he refers to being ready to sail to "Shangri-La," seems the character depicted in the poem prefers to live in the past and life has placed him there.

Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well- written Etheree. We can go anywhere in our mind. The best places to go is the dream world we can create ourselves and make it as the best place ever.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2017

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reply by the author on 14-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked this Etheree. Appreciate all your comments ... ;o)