2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Linked Tanka (After the harvest)"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very good. especially now that I understand how it came about, but are you sure the husband and wife killed each other. Was the family named Menendez by any chance?
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Very good. especially now that I understand how it came about, but are you sure the husband and wife killed each other. Was the family named Menendez by any chance?
Comment Written 11-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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The mother killed the husband and herself. Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Gypsy
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a GREAT write.
The artwork speaks a thousand words. The image shown is a perfect match for this poem. The font color goes well with the background.
I look forward to reading more.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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This is a GREAT write.
The artwork speaks a thousand words. The image shown is a perfect match for this poem. The font color goes well with the background.
I look forward to reading more.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 11-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Excellently worded poem, of abuse, murder, loss and gain, sometimes children are better off without some parents. And these fin words display in very strong, descriptive imagery the ultimate story of a protective and sacrificial mother, pinnacle of love's expression, beautifully written Gypsy. Well done, blessings, Roy
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Excellently worded poem, of abuse, murder, loss and gain, sometimes children are better off without some parents. And these fin words display in very strong, descriptive imagery the ultimate story of a protective and sacrificial mother, pinnacle of love's expression, beautifully written Gypsy. Well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 11-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate you reading and reviewing my work.
Gypsy
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Most welcome Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Gypsy, Now may I ask who put in the last death haiku. To me it sounds like the end of yours and Hitcher's linked haiku
Smiles
Gert
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Hi Gypsy, Now may I ask who put in the last death haiku. To me it sounds like the end of yours and Hitcher's linked haiku
Smiles
Gert
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Comment Written 11-May-2017
reply by the author on 11-May-2017
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Yes, it is the end. Thank you for reading.
Gypsy
