Late Winter Snow
Making the best of it52 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
'And now we sit beside the hearth.
The kettle set to steep.
We had a notion for romance --
Instead....we fell asleep.'
Such a sweet, warm and uplifting poem! Ticked all the boxes fro me frankly tought it was superb and very sweet love Meia x
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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'And now we sit beside the hearth.
The kettle set to steep.
We had a notion for romance --
Instead....we fell asleep.'
Such a sweet, warm and uplifting poem! Ticked all the boxes fro me frankly tought it was superb and very sweet love Meia x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Meia for your kind review.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi,
this is a very good entry into the uplifting poem contest. The scene of joy and laughter, is evident in your well written poem,
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Hi,
this is a very good entry into the uplifting poem contest. The scene of joy and laughter, is evident in your well written poem,
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Mary for your kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This uplifting poem, Late Winter Snow, pretty much captures the day many could have had as the snow finds us again before leaving the area for another year. What last minute fun could be had in this last blanket of the projectile-making, white, frozen stuff. And teh metaphor for our middle and past ages plays into the tendency to sleep rather than romance. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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This uplifting poem, Late Winter Snow, pretty much captures the day many could have had as the snow finds us again before leaving the area for another year. What last minute fun could be had in this last blanket of the projectile-making, white, frozen stuff. And teh metaphor for our middle and past ages plays into the tendency to sleep rather than romance. Nice.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Bill for your kind review.
Comment from Rhonni
This is a lovely and happy poem telling of the return of winter...it is entertaining and uplifting, even as it may be a dreaded thing. I like how smoothly it flows and your rhyme scheme...nicely done
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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This is a lovely and happy poem telling of the return of winter...it is entertaining and uplifting, even as it may be a dreaded thing. I like how smoothly it flows and your rhyme scheme...nicely done
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Rhonni for your kind review and special rating.
Comment from Susanjohn
:-)))) wonderful! We got a blanket of snow last night too!!...I really enjoyed your snow time poem!!...good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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:-)))) wonderful! We got a blanket of snow last night too!!...I really enjoyed your snow time poem!!...good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Susan for your kind review.
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Wow, a vibrant poem with such good enthusiasm. Every one of us wanted to spend time with nature but we rarely do it. At least poems like these to take us into the snow.
A wonderful imagery with such good phrases.
Have a nice day
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Wow, a vibrant poem with such good enthusiasm. Every one of us wanted to spend time with nature but we rarely do it. At least poems like these to take us into the snow.
A wonderful imagery with such good phrases.
Have a nice day
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from mvbrooks
What a great way to spend a day--in an unexpected snowfall. This took me back to a memory of when I was 14. I would babysit for a family of 4 small boys, ages 3 - 10. We had a late snowfall that gave us a day off from school. I was ready to relax when three of the boys appeared on our porch--their mother needed me to babysit so she could go to work.
At first, I was disappointed to lose my free day. Much like this poem, the day turned in to an adventure in the snow with the four boys and one of my best babysitting memories.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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What a great way to spend a day--in an unexpected snowfall. This took me back to a memory of when I was 14. I would babysit for a family of 4 small boys, ages 3 - 10. We had a late snowfall that gave us a day off from school. I was ready to relax when three of the boys appeared on our porch--their mother needed me to babysit so she could go to work.
At first, I was disappointed to lose my free day. Much like this poem, the day turned in to an adventure in the snow with the four boys and one of my best babysitting memories.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review and sharing your best babysitting memories. .
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a terrific attitude - you did well with this writing challenge.
The rhythm is so nice and bouncy and your words were definitely uplifting. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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What a terrific attitude - you did well with this writing challenge.
The rhythm is so nice and bouncy and your words were definitely uplifting. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Louise for your kind review.
Comment from Pantygynt
That last line doesn't say much for the charms of your companion. Lol. Never mind the intention was to be uplifting rather than erotic and it certainly made me chuckle over that missed opportunity.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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That last line doesn't say much for the charms of your companion. Lol. Never mind the intention was to be uplifting rather than erotic and it certainly made me chuckle over that missed opportunity.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Sure, the first light snowfall may be a chance to dance giddily, leaving footprints through the neighborhood. But for the last drubbings of snow, you have to really work at enjoying it. I agree - it's time for Spring. Thanks for your wonderful poem.
Bill~
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Sure, the first light snowfall may be a chance to dance giddily, leaving footprints through the neighborhood. But for the last drubbings of snow, you have to really work at enjoying it. I agree - it's time for Spring. Thanks for your wonderful poem.
Bill~
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you Bill for your kind review.
