Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

This is a simply lovely valentine poem, my friend.
the words, and both rhythm and rhyme flowing
smoothly throughout. I see it's for the contest...
I am pretty sure that entries must be in
acrostic style - first letter of each line spelling
the title of the poem.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Blessings,
Margaret

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

OH I never thought of that, I will recheck it. thanks

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Jackarrie,

First of all that artwork is heart-stoppingly gorgeous! Congrats on your talent! Loved it!

Now to the poem - I wish you luck in the contest - it was quite romantic! I only saw one potential nit:
1.) I will forever treasure (your) compassion,

Thanks!

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Robyn, thanks for your excellent review and also pointing out the missing letter. I have tried to enter the quiz getting to know me, I love the idea, and It is not working out with the instructions on the end of it. I will try again to do it.

Mary

reply by robyn corum on 04-Feb-2017

Just go to my quiz and at the bottom you should see where it say 'add a chapter' then you should be able to post from there. Try that.

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017

Thanks Robyn will do that.