When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 109 "Time to Forget the Past"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from Ella25
Very interesting story. I need to go back to previous chapters to understand what is going on. You picked me interested to read more. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Very interesting story. I need to go back to previous chapters to understand what is going on. You picked me interested to read more. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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I'm pleased to hear that this hooked you. Eventually, I'll put this on Kindle or Amazon. May have to change names to protect the innocent. :-)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Shari
= Never easy with kids, and especially when they end up with someone who isn't easy to be around.
= Nice you have started working your way back to each other.
= Maybe now that her dad is ill, she'll come home more often.
= Be nice if both kids could.
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<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Hi, Shari
= Never easy with kids, and especially when they end up with someone who isn't easy to be around.
= Nice you have started working your way back to each other.
= Maybe now that her dad is ill, she'll come home more often.
= Be nice if both kids could.
<> Merry Christmas & Happy New Year <>
<> Have a wonderful holiday season <>
<> If you don't celebrate--have a great day/night <>
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers & Blessings <> Jax
<> Published as <> Jacqueline M Franklin
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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I don't expect to see Nichole again, well maybe if Frank passes, she'll come to console. I'd sure like to know what goes on her mind these days. I get a feeling, she's not a happy camper. Wait until the next chapter.
Got my small artificial tree up early this year. I usually wait until the day before. :-)
Comment from MissMerri
This is an interesting story and very well told. I didn't see any typos except possibly this: "We waited for another hour for the tow truck to pick up us... " I think you may have meant to say "to pick us up" didn't you? You manage conversations very well and the characters are easy to see. Well done. I'm enjoying it.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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This is an interesting story and very well told. I didn't see any typos except possibly this: "We waited for another hour for the tow truck to pick up us... " I think you may have meant to say "to pick us up" didn't you? You manage conversations very well and the characters are easy to see. Well done. I'm enjoying it.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Miss Merri. I found it very therapeutic to write. Appreciate your catching the spag.
