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1-6-1 form60 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
haha. this is rather funny and the picture adds to the humor dear anonymous! not necessarily a strong contender but an amusing one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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haha. this is rather funny and the picture adds to the humor dear anonymous! not necessarily a strong contender but an amusing one.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Rebekka, thank you so very much...and blessing to you as well...xxoo
Comment from judester
This is my favorite one. Beloved Goofy doing what he does best, daooh...Great rhymes too Good luck in the contest, cheers, judester
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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This is my favorite one. Beloved Goofy doing what he does best, daooh...Great rhymes too Good luck in the contest, cheers, judester
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Judy, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the luck...xxoo
Comment from seaglass
This little poem makes skillful use of words. And using Goofy as an illustration is fitting. I fear america has not jumped, but tripped over the trumpy stump and fell in the dump.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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This little poem makes skillful use of words. And using Goofy as an illustration is fitting. I fear america has not jumped, but tripped over the trumpy stump and fell in the dump.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Carolyn, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
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I like fairytales so I won't put him in that bracket. He's a racist, a sex offender, and fascists. Very disappointing.
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Carolyn, this was not about Trump...it was all in full...just a poem on falling...and I like the picture...because it's in a contest...I keep my reply short...sorry if it upset you
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It didn't offend my, I hate trump. Lol
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Hilarious :-) The artwork compliments your 1-6-1 perfectly. You've met the three rhyme requirement with such a fun write. I wish you well in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hilarious :-) The artwork compliments your 1-6-1 perfectly. You've met the three rhyme requirement with such a fun write. I wish you well in the contest
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Mary, thank you so much...I'm glad it made you smile...and thank you for your wishes...xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL. This is a goofy poem- okay, I admit it, I couldn't resist - it's actually FUN! I loved it! The form is so tiny, the word choices are especially important to make any kind of impact (okay- I did it gain - sorry. But that silliness tells you how much I enjoyed your poem, doesn't it? *Big grin*) Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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LOL. This is a goofy poem- okay, I admit it, I couldn't resist - it's actually FUN! I loved it! The form is so tiny, the word choices are especially important to make any kind of impact (okay- I did it gain - sorry. But that silliness tells you how much I enjoyed your poem, doesn't it? *Big grin*) Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Dawn, I am so glad it made you grin...put a smile on your face...Goofy is one of my favorite...thank you so very much...and thank you for the luck...xxoo
Comment from AnnaLinda
OMG Poet,
Really? A 1-6-1 mono rhyme?
With a cartoon? Very fun and
creative. I guess we have to
imagine the stump...
LOL
Linda
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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OMG Poet,
Really? A 1-6-1 mono rhyme?
With a cartoon? Very fun and
creative. I guess we have to
imagine the stump...
LOL
Linda
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Linda, yes ya do...LOL...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it....xxoo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Did you write this about me? I'm a very clumsy person. This was fun to read and the picture only adds to the poem. You did a great job and I wish you all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Did you write this about me? I'm a very clumsy person. This was fun to read and the picture only adds to the poem. You did a great job and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Meghan, thank you for a great review...LOL..no I think I wrote it on me...so glad you like it...and thank you for the best wishes...xxoo
Comment from mvbrooks
Love the fun image -- it's a great animation of the poem and displays that the stump did make the jumper fall, with a thump--but, since Goofy is a cartoon, "no harm done." Good use of the 3 line rhyme.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Love the fun image -- it's a great animation of the poem and displays that the stump did make the jumper fall, with a thump--but, since Goofy is a cartoon, "no harm done." Good use of the 3 line rhyme.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI MV, thank you for a great review...Goofy is one of my favorites...so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from Winslow
Dear Poet,
Jump that stump, Goofy, otherwise you'll end up on your duff. Good rhyming and a great picture to highlight your poem.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Dear Poet,
Jump that stump, Goofy, otherwise you'll end up on your duff. Good rhyming and a great picture to highlight your poem.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Winslow, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from amada
Ha, ha, I really like this one. Short, to the point and very, very truthful statement, specially in this Election Day. I see the candidates having a lot of stumps in their way!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Ha, ha, I really like this one. Short, to the point and very, very truthful statement, specially in this Election Day. I see the candidates having a lot of stumps in their way!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Amada, yes they did...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo