Treasure Your Loved Ones
Our lives can change so quickly...30 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done Bill, I can understand how you won this contest Bill, what wonderful advice you give in this marvellous contest winning Naani poem, beautifully writing with appropriate artwork support, well done, congratulations, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Well done Bill, I can understand how you won this contest Bill, what wonderful advice you give in this marvellous contest winning Naani poem, beautifully writing with appropriate artwork support, well done, congratulations, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much Roy for your warm comments and the excellent review, I appreciate it. Enjoy your Sunday my friend. Bill
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You too Bill
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A very good naani poem you have crafted here. I missed it in the competiton rounds. LOL
Says a lot with very little to work with. very well done
GMG
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Hi there,
A very good naani poem you have crafted here. I missed it in the competiton rounds. LOL
Says a lot with very little to work with. very well done
GMG
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Thank you G-man, I appreciate your excellent review. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from BlueMarble
congratulations on the win. I am so glad this one won the contest. It is a wonderful, thought provoking statement on life's reality. Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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congratulations on the win. I am so glad this one won the contest. It is a wonderful, thought provoking statement on life's reality. Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your very nice comments and wonderful rating, I really appreciate it. I think that most of us do take our loved ones for granted and eventually something will happen to make us regret it. Thanks again my friend and enjoy your Sunday. Bill
Comment from pharp
This is a well thought our Naani, many homes are broken because of various reasons. As I looked at that picture and read this very insightful poem, it brought tears to my eyes. My mother is 91 years young, she had eight children, two of my sisters are deceased. I love my mother, she is in better health than I am except she suffers from dementia. Out of the six remaining children, one would think that everyone would help with her care. Our family became broken when my father passed in 2006. Your Naani poem is very touching all my siblings need to read it. Thanks for sharing and the very best to your in the contest. Exceptional job and it touched my heart. Blessings............Portia
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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This is a well thought our Naani, many homes are broken because of various reasons. As I looked at that picture and read this very insightful poem, it brought tears to my eyes. My mother is 91 years young, she had eight children, two of my sisters are deceased. I love my mother, she is in better health than I am except she suffers from dementia. Out of the six remaining children, one would think that everyone would help with her care. Our family became broken when my father passed in 2006. Your Naani poem is very touching all my siblings need to read it. Thanks for sharing and the very best to your in the contest. Exceptional job and it touched my heart. Blessings............Portia
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much Portia for your wonderful review and for the exceptional rating, I truly appreciate it. Basically, my family has experienced the same thing as yours did. We have also grown apart over the last few years and we're all in our sixties and seventies. Please pray for us, as I will pray for yours. And God bless your mother, 91 years young, that's terrific! Take care of yourself my friend and enjoy your Sunday.
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent. Too often we ignore loved ones (cell phone while
sitting next to those we love, etc.) or just taking them for
granted. Your poem points out the reward of truly living in
the present. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Excellent. Too often we ignore loved ones (cell phone while
sitting next to those we love, etc.) or just taking them for
granted. Your poem points out the reward of truly living in
the present. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much Marilyn for your wonderful review, I truly appreciate it. We do take our loved ones for granted. I used to be guilty of that, but not anymore, thank God. Enjoy your weekend my friend.
Comment from Ogden
i think you have a winner here (I haven't checked the voting).
A superb sentiment, skillfully executed. Good luck!
Don
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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i think you have a winner here (I haven't checked the voting).
A superb sentiment, skillfully executed. Good luck!
Don
Comment Written 24-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Thank you very much Don for your wonderful comments, I appreciate it a great deal. Have a nice weekend my friend.
Comment from l.raven
time goes by so fast...and you never know when yours is up...young or old...cherish that time together...hating is the devil speaking...very well written...
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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time goes by so fast...and you never know when yours is up...young or old...cherish that time together...hating is the devil speaking...very well written...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016
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Hello Linda: Thanks for your great review, I really appreciate it. Your words are so true, hating is the devil speaking through us. Have a nice weekend my old friend. Take care of yourself.
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yes it is...you are so very welcome..and you have a nice weekend as well...take care....xxoo Linda
Comment from RYME4U
THis is well written, The Naani style is perfect I like that you rhymed it and the message is thougtht provoking, great presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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THis is well written, The Naani style is perfect I like that you rhymed it and the message is thougtht provoking, great presentation.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thank you my friend for your excellent review, I'm glad you liked it. Have a great weekend.
Comment from RodG
I like your using a naani as a way of conveying wisdom. Your advice is sage and well-put in but four lines. One small error: "to" late should be "too." Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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I like your using a naani as a way of conveying wisdom. Your advice is sage and well-put in but four lines. One small error: "to" late should be "too." Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thank you Rod for your excellent review and for catching my error, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend.
Comment from Mark Valentine
A message one can never hear too much. An old message expressed in an original way - a great use of the Naani form - should do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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A message one can never hear too much. An old message expressed in an original way - a great use of the Naani form - should do well in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016
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Thank you Mark for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend.