Comment from GWHARGIS

Exceptional

I love this. I am a true believer that blowing bubbles will lift anyone's spirits. The picture was a perfect choice. Great emotional feeling in the poem. Good luck in the contest. Happy new year. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Hi Gretchen. Thanks again for the wonderful review and special rating. So glad you enjoyed this 2-4-2 poem and picture.
Cheers ... ;o) Art

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

I had a wand that made huge bubbles many years ago. I think I need to go buy one of those bubble making apparatuses again. I enjoyed reading this ultra short poetic format... John

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks, John. Glad you enjoyed this 2-4-2 poem. I remember those large bubble-making wands - fun, but messy.
Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o) Art

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

So cute!
Very true, too.
Bravo!


My 2-4-2 commentary for you!

Happy New Year.

I recently viewed a video with a dog chasing bubbles and a baby giggling hysterically over it. Adorable.

Nice photo.

Nice feeling.

Happy New Year!


Nice to see you posting.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks, rd! So glad you enjoyed this 2-4-2 poem and picture. Bubbles do have a magical quality. That video with dog chasing bubbles and baby giggling sounds like a hoot. Hope to do more posting and reviewing this year. 2015 was rough year for me - went through 3 life-changing events and there was virtually no time for FS. 2016 looks much better for exploring my creative side.

Do appreciate all your comments and wish you a happy and prosperous new year. Cheers ... ;o) Art

reply by rama devi on 03-Jan-2016

Sorry to hear you've had a hard year, my friend. Hope 2016 proves creative and inspiring for you.

Warmest Wishes,
rd

Comment from LiveLoveDie

Excellent

The simplest of words yield the deepest of thoughts. Especially watching a child blowing and popping said bubbles. The sweetest thing, makes all of your worries disappear. Thanks for writing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this 2-4-2. Bubbles can be magical. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The biggest ones, as illustrated here for the smallest people and the smallest ones like you find say, in a champagne glass that has just been refilled, for the biggest people.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks. Appreciate your comments on this 2-4-2 poem and picture. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

You managed to inject great depth into this seemingly simple piece. quite an achievement given the 2-4-2 format.

All the best with this in the competition.
GMG

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks, GMG. Glad you enjoyed this 2-4-2 poem. This form looks easy, but it's quite a challenge. Do appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)