THE TRINING Book Three
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Comment from c_lucas
I am assuming this is coming to a end. All of your characters are in place. Your post is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I am assuming this is coming to a end. All of your characters are in place. Your post is very well written with an interesting flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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The characters are in place. I'd like it to finish. I wonder if Tolstoy said that?
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from chasennov
Any Surprises On the Menu? A chapter in the book, THE TRINING. Book Three. Once Again: Dinner Is On.' Another excellent chapter you have created here of the Trining, Jay.
Faultless as usual, and as gripping as ever. Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Any Surprises On the Menu? A chapter in the book, THE TRINING. Book Three. Once Again: Dinner Is On.' Another excellent chapter you have created here of the Trining, Jay.
Faultless as usual, and as gripping as ever. Very well done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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THank you, Chas. Appreciate your reading this.
Comment from LIJ Red
Exhale. Exhalation. Breath. Never mind. Like the beginning of a TV movie, when you wait to see what's on and learn it's a Johndoe film, by the Ubangi studios, by the Ishmaelite corporation, in conjuction with the Koshercut Alliance in cooperation with the...building the suspense. Just kidding, the backstory here helps with the whole
story, as well as setting the stage. Excellent.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Exhale. Exhalation. Breath. Never mind. Like the beginning of a TV movie, when you wait to see what's on and learn it's a Johndoe film, by the Ubangi studios, by the Ishmaelite corporation, in conjuction with the Koshercut Alliance in cooperation with the...building the suspense. Just kidding, the backstory here helps with the whole
story, as well as setting the stage. Excellent.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Red. I'll take all your suggestions to heart. First I'll endeavor to understand them. LOL, I appreciate you.
Comment from royowen
Things have certainly changed from the former times when Pondria and Axtilla were together and Glnot Reuther killed his brother being conjoined twins. Axtilla's under the power and influence of Kyre, the seer. You haven't lost any of your scribal powers Jay, this is a fascinating curve in the road, I wonder if Doctrex will get to meet Axtilla, there's more to this than meets the eye, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Things have certainly changed from the former times when Pondria and Axtilla were together and Glnot Reuther killed his brother being conjoined twins. Axtilla's under the power and influence of Kyre, the seer. You haven't lost any of your scribal powers Jay, this is a fascinating curve in the road, I wonder if Doctrex will get to meet Axtilla, there's more to this than meets the eye, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I love it, Roy, when your comments show how astute you are in your reading and indicates how much you enjoy reading it. You are important to my success here. Thank you.
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Most welcome
Comment from Eigle Rull
This is a very thick story, with many interesting parts to it. I enjoy the dialog each time I read a bit more. It makes it interesting and gives me ideas of what is going on. Don't misunderstand me - I know what's going on, it's just that it's a strong storyline and I like to see and know all of it. I must continue to read this story, to find out where it leads to. And who will win the battle. If a battle is to be fought at all. Best wishes to you, my friend.
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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This is a very thick story, with many interesting parts to it. I enjoy the dialog each time I read a bit more. It makes it interesting and gives me ideas of what is going on. Don't misunderstand me - I know what's going on, it's just that it's a strong storyline and I like to see and know all of it. I must continue to read this story, to find out where it leads to. And who will win the battle. If a battle is to be fought at all. Best wishes to you, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I think what you're saying is "get on with the fighting!" LOL, I know what you mean. Thanks for hanging in there, Elgie.
Comment from Curly Girly
Okay, I'm glad that this all sounds logical to Pondria.
This was an imaginative, artistic scene:
I made a running leap and grabbed her legs, but instead of pulling her down, she whipped me up through the opening and into a new dimension. Not only were there no Pomnots, but I gazed about to see sunlight that dazzled my senses and a carpet of dime-sized pink flowers in every direction.
Dimes, pink flowers, lol!
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Okay, I'm glad that this all sounds logical to Pondria.
This was an imaginative, artistic scene:
I made a running leap and grabbed her legs, but instead of pulling her down, she whipped me up through the opening and into a new dimension. Not only were there no Pomnots, but I gazed about to see sunlight that dazzled my senses and a carpet of dime-sized pink flowers in every direction.
Dimes, pink flowers, lol!
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Okay, okay, I changed the flowers to thumb-nail sized. Better?
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No. I LIKED your first description better.
Comment from gamay
Hello Sir,
Another nicely written and wonderful story you written.
Sorry for not reviewing much much but I got a warning in fanstory about my reviewing i don't know why i not give any bad review since i star review i always give a good rate. I don't want criticized because it is not my habit.
Anyway I always like your work and i know you because of Fez.or feral in Malanda
God bless,
gamay
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Hello Sir,
Another nicely written and wonderful story you written.
Sorry for not reviewing much much but I got a warning in fanstory about my reviewing i don't know why i not give any bad review since i star review i always give a good rate. I don't want criticized because it is not my habit.
Anyway I always like your work and i know you because of Fez.or feral in Malanda
God bless,
gamay
Comment Written 15-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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God bless, Gamay. I'm sorry you've gotten so criticized for your reviewing. You have a home here for my posts any day. I'm happy you enjoyed this, and look forward to having you back again.
