Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Lovely message, the Atonement of Christ did indeed pave the way for redemption if we believe in Him. Good use of rhyming and a great spiritual message to learn from. faye

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015

Hi Faye,
Thank you for the excellent analysis and encouragement. I appreciate your insights on the theme.
Debi

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Debi

_ This is a beautiful peace in spirit of Him and the message so very true.
_ Awesome artwork with this too, as well as formatting.
_ Can't pick out a favorite part--it is just a lovely work.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015

Thank you for the wonderful six stars, Jax! I am pleased you liked it that much. The encouragement it appreciate.

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 01-Nov-2015

You are very welcome.
Well deserved. (*>*)

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

I like the theme of this poem. Relying on the faith with Jesus. You can't go wrong and you will always be on the right path when you follow the teachings of Jesus Christ. I enjoyed reading the poem from beginning to end.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015

Thank you for the gracious review. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the theme too.

Comment from hugje96

Excellent

A well written peom praising the Lord and his everlasting compassion and the hope and knowledge that he will be there for you in your darkest hour. When you "think all hpoe is lost", Christ will be at your side. A poem full of promise of light at the end of the tunnel and of not having to face the world alone. Well done great write

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015

Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate your comments about the theme. Thank you for the encouragement.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

A great poem for Christians. There's so many religions, and they all seem to have the answer. I know they all believe in the same God. The Muslims and Christians in the Middle East seem to disprove that. The Hindus have several Gods, and Buddhism is another story. This really made me think. Les

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015

Hi Les,
Thank you for the thoughts to ponder. Yes, there are a lot of religions out there. I do like your thought that they all believe in the same God. If only everyone acted like it. There are too many wars in history that were fought in the name of religions that teach we should all respect and love one another.
There is no better compliment than your closing line--that it made you think. Thank you!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great presentation. The artwork is special and awesome at the same time. The background with the white font add to the specialness of the words. Nice use of rhyme to add to the flow and enjoyment.

I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing an uplifting poem of faith.

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015

Thank you for the review with such encouraging comments. I appreciate the analysis of the poem and its presentation. I am happy you enjoyed it.

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

What a beautiful poem. It's light enough to be accepted and not heavy-handed into preaching. It takes a well-known bible verse and uses it as an inspiration to consider Christ's strength and to turn to him when our own strength seems low. Enjoyable, uplifting read.

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015

I love this review. Thank you so much, especially for the second sentence. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi