When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Justice for Me"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from ProSongwriter
Hey Shari ...
Loved this chapter. The tide always brings in that which is thrown out in the water. Piggy eyes got her delivery! Sometimes, it's hard to keep the gloating in side, isn't it???!! Loved the caveat of her putting her books on eBay.
Looking forward to the next ne. Will stay tuned ... same channel, same station!
Best to you ...
Alan
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Hey Shari ...
Loved this chapter. The tide always brings in that which is thrown out in the water. Piggy eyes got her delivery! Sometimes, it's hard to keep the gloating in side, isn't it???!! Loved the caveat of her putting her books on eBay.
Looking forward to the next ne. Will stay tuned ... same channel, same station!
Best to you ...
Alan
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thanks, Alan, for the review. You got what I wanted readers to see. How is your health these days?
Shari
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You are very welcome. even with it's sad moments and all the ups and downs, this has been one fabulous read. I try not to miss a single episode. This would be a great daytime soap ... but those days are mostly gone now.
Health tends to wander all over the place ... not too bad at times, pretty good occasionally and pretty rotten at other times. It's an ongoing process. Damned glad I have great insurance! Thanks for asking ... much appreciated! Hugs ...
Alan
Comment from Eigle Rull
Ttwo (T) years after Piggy Eyes gave Arthur my four gifted classes, her superior gave away her immaculate, well-organized room with its artistic bulletin boards,cardboard displays of castles and souvenir replicas of England's famous tourist spots.
Ellen would have to abandon her groomed space twice a day and allow a "stranger" to "mess" is (it) up.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love it when things come back onto the shoulders of people that disregard the feelings of others. Miss Piggy Eyes deserved what she got! I'm also glad that you got to enjoy her rants.
This was as always, a very well written chapter. It had the emotions I like to see and the descriptions that make things come alive. It held my attention and interest well, like always. It was a pleasure to read. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Ttwo (T) years after Piggy Eyes gave Arthur my four gifted classes, her superior gave away her immaculate, well-organized room with its artistic bulletin boards,cardboard displays of castles and souvenir replicas of England's famous tourist spots.
Ellen would have to abandon her groomed space twice a day and allow a "stranger" to "mess" is (it) up.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love it when things come back onto the shoulders of people that disregard the feelings of others. Miss Piggy Eyes deserved what she got! I'm also glad that you got to enjoy her rants.
This was as always, a very well written chapter. It had the emotions I like to see and the descriptions that make things come alive. It held my attention and interest well, like always. It was a pleasure to read. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Darn spell check of the new FS doesn't seem to work. I swore I had fixed the double T. Oh well, thanks for catching the other typo and I love that you saw my purpose in writing it.
