When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Jeff's Vows "A family's love is tested.
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Comment from Curly Girly
This is quite a chilling story to read. I was left wondering if the hand was false or a real corpse's hand--I'm not sure if I really want to know the true answer to that!
One spag spotted:
Maybe that's what wrong with Jeff.
Maybe that's what's wrong with Jeff.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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This is quite a chilling story to read. I was left wondering if the hand was false or a real corpse's hand--I'm not sure if I really want to know the true answer to that!
One spag spotted:
Maybe that's what wrong with Jeff.
Maybe that's what's wrong with Jeff.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Fixed the spag, CG. LOL the hand was plastic. I went back and added something to make that clear. A real hand would be chilling indeed.
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Phew! Thank goodness for that.
Comment from sibhus
Wow, holy gala, Bat Girl. This sounds like quite a wedding. It beats any of the dull, god when does the reception start, that I've ever been to. Normally I get blasted at the reception and remember much of the wedding. This one I definitely would have remembered. Great writing, it really makes you feel your were there.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Wow, holy gala, Bat Girl. This sounds like quite a wedding. It beats any of the dull, god when does the reception start, that I've ever been to. Normally I get blasted at the reception and remember much of the wedding. This one I definitely would have remembered. Great writing, it really makes you feel your were there.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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You'd have loved it, husky. Who would you have dressed up to be?
Big Foot, I'm betting. LOL