Joe's Choice
Joe has to make a choice about a woman he wants to marry.23 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I am not religious but that certainly doesn't take away from this short piece. The fact is, when someone steps up and takes responsibility, of love and taking care of a child, especially when the child may not be his, this is a real man... whether you involve religion or not. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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I am not religious but that certainly doesn't take away from this short piece. The fact is, when someone steps up and takes responsibility, of love and taking care of a child, especially when the child may not be his, this is a real man... whether you involve religion or not. Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the review, and for showing me another perspective on the story. My intention was to parallel modern day decisions with another long ago. Thanks for looking deeper.
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You are most welcome, Davisr.
Comment from juliesibs
This is an awesome tale, in a contemporary style. Very well done and the story line is wonderful. A well known tale told in a great manner.
Blessings, Julie
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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This is an awesome tale, in a contemporary style. Very well done and the story line is wonderful. A well known tale told in a great manner.
Blessings, Julie
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much! I tried to go for a Bible theme this time.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, it's an oldie and made in a concise way, in exactly sixty words. I never know just how to judge these sort of biblical tales, because someone else wrote them. Oh well, a solid entry.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Yes, it's an oldie and made in a concise way, in exactly sixty words. I never know just how to judge these sort of biblical tales, because someone else wrote them. Oh well, a solid entry.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Good point, someone else did write it, so I guess I'm just summarizing.
