THE TRINING Book Three
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "KARULE BARSACH'S TESTIMONY (Pt 2)"JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from Walter L. Jones
obligation escape, covers pulled up, one way or the other, voice recognition, mind control, limited information, or validation, soft bed verus torture, wonder, limited, strange discussion, reaction even more so, the writer plays with us, very clever, curiosity brought back the cat, nine lives, I wonder..Walt
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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obligation escape, covers pulled up, one way or the other, voice recognition, mind control, limited information, or validation, soft bed verus torture, wonder, limited, strange discussion, reaction even more so, the writer plays with us, very clever, curiosity brought back the cat, nine lives, I wonder..Walt
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Bless you one more time, Walt. You've been my mainstay as far as reading every chapter. I just want you to know how appreciated I am for you, not to mention the 6 stars!
Comment from Adri7enne
Another good chapter, Jay. It seems to be developing in a natural way. I'm starting to know your characters. You handle the dialogue really well. Nice smooth prose, spag free and a pleasure to read. I'll keep watching for it. Well done!
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Another good chapter, Jay. It seems to be developing in a natural way. I'm starting to know your characters. You handle the dialogue really well. Nice smooth prose, spag free and a pleasure to read. I'll keep watching for it. Well done!
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Oh! Oh! I am so glad to have you aboard, Adri7enne! I remember you from the last time I was on FanStory (before I had a hiatus) That was about 4 years ago. Have I forgotten your reading this novel? Blame it on old age, but be diplomatic about it.
Comment from royowen
What terrible goings on, poor soldiers, torture must be a terrible thing to endure, the pain and the human indignity, (Jesus came to mind) great episode, Colonel Zarbs seems a lot more contrite, I wonder what Glnot Reuther wants of him, I guess we'll find out shortly, don't call me shortly! Well done, another riveter, blessings, Roy.
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What terrible goings on, poor soldiers, torture must be a terrible thing to endure, the pain and the human indignity, (Jesus came to mind) great episode, Colonel Zarbs seems a lot more contrite, I wonder what Glnot Reuther wants of him, I guess we'll find out shortly, don't call me shortly! Well done, another riveter, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Thank you Roy for your always insightful reviews. You are a blessing to me.
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As you are too, Jay
Comment from Goodauthor
Well, hello again, I'm sorry about the other chapters, I checked them out and saved them each time I was online, but they automatically removed before I got to them. I read the chapter you posted yesterday, and I was called away before I could rate it, but I was able to tell the battle had been fought. This is a very good chapter. I wish I could read the others, though. This is good.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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Well, hello again, I'm sorry about the other chapters, I checked them out and saved them each time I was online, but they automatically removed before I got to them. I read the chapter you posted yesterday, and I was called away before I could rate it, but I was able to tell the battle had been fought. This is a very good chapter. I wish I could read the others, though. This is good.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
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You are so kind for this six and the other. I'm just tickled you came back and that you're enjoying the tale. Keep on coming back, Linda!
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You're welcome.
