THE TRINING Book Three
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Comment from JackiO
I hope Doctrex is not fighting for a loosing cause.
I also think his interrogator - Zarb? is as stupid
as he is evil - I hope?
Another riveting chapter.
Thanx!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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I hope Doctrex is not fighting for a loosing cause.
I also think his interrogator - Zarb? is as stupid
as he is evil - I hope?
Another riveting chapter.
Thanx!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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You don't know the half of it, JackiO. LOL, but, stupid can still kill. Thanks so much for your kind words.
Comment from amahra
I haven't hated anyone in this story until now; and Arklyn Zarbs is high up on my list. I hope Doctrex finds a way to escape. I don't want him tortured. Great and exciting chapter, Jay.
but to slit your throat, or drive a dagger in[to] your heart,
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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I haven't hated anyone in this story until now; and Arklyn Zarbs is high up on my list. I hope Doctrex finds a way to escape. I don't want him tortured. Great and exciting chapter, Jay.
but to slit your throat, or drive a dagger in[to] your heart,
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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God bless you Ama. Thanks for your kindness. I made the change you suggested. Thanks for pointing it out. Oh, I love my SIXES! Thanks for that!
Comment from c_lucas
I am curious where this is going. Since the enemy has Doctrex the war is over. This is a puzzling situation. Your post is well written and I didn't see any errors.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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I am curious where this is going. Since the enemy has Doctrex the war is over. This is a puzzling situation. Your post is well written and I didn't see any errors.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Arklyn Zarbs isn't Glnot Rhuether. He's just an officer and not even at the Palace of Qarnolt. And Rhuether has Axtilla. How can I end it without a love scene? LOL, thanks, Charlie.
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You welcome,Jay. Charlie
Comment from rjpurdy
Well it seems the Supreme Colonel Zarbs is as bit of a Jabba the Hut type. In a battle of wits, General Doctrex would surely win. Surely he will alive long enough to be rescued. I am expexting quite the battle to ensue. I see a lot more building with Glnot Reuther's proposed nuptials. Things are building nicely again Jay. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Well it seems the Supreme Colonel Zarbs is as bit of a Jabba the Hut type. In a battle of wits, General Doctrex would surely win. Surely he will alive long enough to be rescued. I am expexting quite the battle to ensue. I see a lot more building with Glnot Reuther's proposed nuptials. Things are building nicely again Jay. Rod
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Rod (Have I been calling you Rod?) Voted for you. There's a lot more to happen between now and the love scene (and I don't mean with Glnot Rhuether.
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Yes, you have been calling me Rod. Perhaps there is something else you would prefer to call me? Thank you for the vote Jay, it means a lot to me. I voted for you as well. Congrats on 3rd. You should have won. Peace Brother. Rod
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I thought I called you Rod, but all of a sudden I was wondering if I might have used Rob. Mikey's a good writer. I'm pleased to be in his company.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Jay,
I don't like the way my Doctrex is being manhandled. This is not looking good.
The only thing we can hope for Mr. Butthead to have been telling lies, and that our guys are still alive, so they can pounce any time! Whew.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Hey, Jay,
I don't like the way my Doctrex is being manhandled. This is not looking good.
The only thing we can hope for Mr. Butthead to have been telling lies, and that our guys are still alive, so they can pounce any time! Whew.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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There will be an interesting twist, but as my friend Jax says, if I tell it to you, I'd have to kill off Chance and Breanna. LOL, thanks for being here.
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Oh, we're throwing my own medicine back at me. Yikes! Just be gentle with my Doctex (*.*)
Cheers!
Comment from marijmd
even under pressure Doctrix is still pretty cool.
The second one watched him die, and after that was more than willing to cooperate with us. - YIKES! that would do it.
Glnot Rhuether - its like saying Voldermort
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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even under pressure Doctrix is still pretty cool.
The second one watched him die, and after that was more than willing to cooperate with us. - YIKES! that would do it.
Glnot Rhuether - its like saying Voldermort
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2014
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Thanks Maria! Voldermort? I know Mort is "death", but what is Volder? Hmmm. Thanks for coming by.
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Harry Potter - cant say his name
:)m
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Never read the books or saw the movies. Now I'm afraid to. I tend to be a sponge.
Comment from Sankey
Wow! Getting very dramatic and awful now, for sure. You are good in your horror filled detail. Somehow I still hold some hope that Doctrex might have some way in his limited condition now of still overcoming these nuts.
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014
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Wow! Getting very dramatic and awful now, for sure. You are good in your horror filled detail. Somehow I still hold some hope that Doctrex might have some way in his limited condition now of still overcoming these nuts.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2014
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No, my readers are now getting a dose of reality. Thanks loyal friend and reader.