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JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from
Sankey
Hm1 Questions, questions. Hen has been dealing with the frasud thing himself for ages. Will see where this all goes. No Spags.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
Yeah, Geoff. Is our general becoming a tad paranoid? Thanks for reading, my friend.
reply by Sankey on 02-Nov-2014
Actually I just thought I wonder if the two guys who came to visit him were set ups by the enemy FAKES themselves ha!
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reply by Sankey on 03-Nov-2014
Sorry for the typos glad you sorted it out hehe!
Comment from
c_lucas
Being a leader is not a job for the weak at heart. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
Thanks, Charlie. And so the adventure is about to begin.
reply by c_lucas on 02-Nov-2014
You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
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