Comment from Verdugo Bolivar

Excellent

Good story, this is my first passage that I am reading but I liked it. Really intriguing how he is breaking his enemies plan.good Job keep writing

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014

Well, I'm so pleased you chose to take a chance with it and found it worthwhile. Please come back. It'll get exciting before long.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hey, Jay,

Well, half the battle is knowing your enemy. It would appear as if they have Glnot down pretty good now. Now to formulate a plan to defeat him at his own game.

Since this is Fantasy, perhaps Doctrex has some in his bag of trick that he has not let on about?? Hmmm??

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)


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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014

Thanks for reading, Jax. Frankly, I'm gettin' kind of tired of all the speechifying. In book form it wouldn't be 4 chapters of Doctrex's addressing his men. You have a chapter today?

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 30-Oct-2014

I agree. It is hard sometimes to condense stuff down to smaller chapters so people will read.

I would have had the last chapter up, but feeling a bit under the weather with my FM, so kind of out of it today. I hope to have the last chapter up tomorrow.

Cheers... Jax