THE TRINING Book Three
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Jay...
Hmmmm. So, it would seem that Zurn may get off an a 'technicality' of sorts? Because if he showed Doctrex what he did against the fire people, then he really didn't desert - technically speaking.
Of course, I could have it all wrong. I know. It's hard to accept, but I will admit it did happen back in 1972.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hey, Jay...
Hmmmm. So, it would seem that Zurn may get off an a 'technicality' of sorts? Because if he showed Doctrex what he did against the fire people, then he really didn't desert - technically speaking.
Of course, I could have it all wrong. I know. It's hard to accept, but I will admit it did happen back in 1972.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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You leadin' me on, girl. What happened in '72? Thanks for your input on this, Jax. Hey, good luck in the book of the month offering.
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LOL... 1972, I realized the mistake I made marrying hubby #1. A mistake I did not correct until 1991.
Thx so much --- it is quite nerve-wracking waiting for the vote!
Comment from c_lucas
A man can be slow with his thoughts, but that doesn't make his retarded. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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A man can be slow with his thoughts, but that doesn't make his retarded. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Charlie. Appreciate your input.
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am much happier. I knew Zurn wouldn't desert. It was a huge misunderstanding.
"I refuse to convict him without his having a military hearing. (The 'his' doesn't sound right. I would use him or omit it and just say without having...)
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I am much happier. I knew Zurn wouldn't desert. It was a huge misunderstanding.
"I refuse to convict him without his having a military hearing. (The 'his' doesn't sound right. I would use him or omit it and just say without having...)
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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I think I agree with you about "his". It is correct grammatically, but doesn't sound right when spoken. I changed it, leaving out "his" and "having". Thanks for the assistance, Barbara.
