Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Makes Me"poems inspired by Psalm 23
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Comment from Ben Colder
A lovely poem that sings a song of peace. The photo enhances your strong words. The doe and little ones send a peaceful message. Well done Shalom.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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A lovely poem that sings a song of peace. The photo enhances your strong words. The doe and little ones send a peaceful message. Well done Shalom.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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I am happy you enjoyed the message. Thank you for the kind comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Debi,
There's nothing like getting lost in nature to feel spiritual and wonder about life. I think of our souls as little sparks of God's loving light. It's hard for us humans to understand eternity, but it's a comforting notion.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Hi Debi,
There's nothing like getting lost in nature to feel spiritual and wonder about life. I think of our souls as little sparks of God's loving light. It's hard for us humans to understand eternity, but it's a comforting notion.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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What a lovely thought, Lou. Thank you for sharing your insights. I appreciate it.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are strong, clear and creative. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are strong, clear and creative. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the lovely comments about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A wonderfully well set springs of well formed tarcets. I like the rhythm and the progression of this work gradually picking from the first tarcet appreciating the beauty of nature and finally delivered the crescendo of our essence in this place. I love this scheme. Nicely conceived and beautifully delivered.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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A wonderfully well set springs of well formed tarcets. I like the rhythm and the progression of this work gradually picking from the first tarcet appreciating the beauty of nature and finally delivered the crescendo of our essence in this place. I love this scheme. Nicely conceived and beautifully delivered.
ola thomas
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you very much for the extra shiny star, Ola Thomas! I am delighted that you liked it. I appreciate the insights you share and the encouraging comments.
Comment from DR DIP
really really nice..you know wj I am a prolific rhymer its my passion to write rhyming verse and I don't think I am written in 3 line rhyme before funnily enough it has always been 3 to 4 verse 4 line rhyme but you know what? I really like it! you just got to get into the rhythm and beat/ canter to appreciate how to read it
thanks for sharing much appreciated
with respect dip
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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really really nice..you know wj I am a prolific rhymer its my passion to write rhyming verse and I don't think I am written in 3 line rhyme before funnily enough it has always been 3 to 4 verse 4 line rhyme but you know what? I really like it! you just got to get into the rhythm and beat/ canter to appreciate how to read it
thanks for sharing much appreciated
with respect dip
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the very flattering review, Dr Dip. I ran across a few poems written in tercet (Thomas Hardy, Percy Shelly) while I was looking up Terza Rima. Some of them were rhymed, some were not. It isn't a form I have seen a lot, but I thought I'd give it a try. It does give a different cadence to a poem, which I thought was kind of fun. I can't wait to see what you come up with.
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You are welcome to see all my work on here and on facebook on my page "diptales poems from the heart" where all my poems are posted and archived
dip
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Thank you. I have read and reviewed some of your work, but I'll have to take a longer look. I appreciate the invitation.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a sweet inspirational poem. Love it. Thank you for sharing. Too many times we are all too busy to see beauty in everything. We are too busy to enjoy the beauty of God's creation. I would not change anything. Good job. Beautiful picture.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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What a sweet inspirational poem. Love it. Thank you for sharing. Too many times we are all too busy to see beauty in everything. We are too busy to enjoy the beauty of God's creation. I would not change anything. Good job. Beautiful picture.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the great insights about the beauty around us. I appreciate the encouraging comments about the writing. Thank you.
Comment from c_lucas
We should all take time to visit the Great Outdoors. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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We should all take time to visit the Great Outdoors. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Charlie. I appreciate your kind comments. Yes, I wish I took the time more often to appreciate the Great Outdoors. I take it for granted way too much.
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent use of mono-rhyming in each tercet
makes me/melodic/mixture - good use of alliterative grouping
more excellent alliteration follows
lovely detail of setting with an upbeat mood
thoughtful use of question in your closing of this poem of faith and appreciation
Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Excellent use of mono-rhyming in each tercet
makes me/melodic/mixture - good use of alliterative grouping
more excellent alliteration follows
lovely detail of setting with an upbeat mood
thoughtful use of question in your closing of this poem of faith and appreciation
Brooke
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the encouraging comments, Brooke. I appreciate the detailed review and your continued support.
Comment from Eric1
Hi W..J.debi, this is a truly wonderful and inspiring piece of poetry my friend, the description and imagery are beautiful with the triolets of rhyming verse you have created a wonderful flow.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Hi W..J.debi, this is a truly wonderful and inspiring piece of poetry my friend, the description and imagery are beautiful with the triolets of rhyming verse you have created a wonderful flow.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Eric. Your comments are very kind and encouraging. I am delighted you liked it.
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You are welcome my friend and yes, I really did enjoy it.
Comment from tdragonfly
Sometimes we need to just step back and ponder the world and be thankful for all the splendor that surrounds us on a daily basis. Your poem reminded me of this. Perhaps I will look at tomorrow with a fresh perspective.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Sometimes we need to just step back and ponder the world and be thankful for all the splendor that surrounds us on a daily basis. Your poem reminded me of this. Perhaps I will look at tomorrow with a fresh perspective.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the kind comments. I am encouraged that it makes you want to look at take time to ponder the splendor surrounding us. Please have a delightful day.