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Sleep baby sleep

A children's poem

28 total reviews 
Comment from amada
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So sweet this little sheep for a baby asleep. I totally like this charming poem, early in the morning. Thank you for posting this relaxing work.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from in777wr#
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This was a very good children's poem. The poem reads well, and the message is clear. The language is such that children would easily understand. Nice job.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I like white sheep. Your poem is of a baby sheep. Everyone loves babies. Great work.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from joeakeefe
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This would mae a wonderful children's rhyme. W the appropriate illustrations, one could create a small book that would educate and entertain a pre-school age child
joeakeefe

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Janie King
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I adore baby sheep, they are so cute and look like they need to be cuddled. My little puppy does remind me a bit of soft fury sheep. Good poem. God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from c_lucas
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Counting sheep is one way to fall asleep. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very soothing sense of peace.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
reply by c_lucas on 10-Mar-2014
    You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Pili Pubul
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What a sweet image you created , my granddaughter will love this poem.
Enjoy the style and tender feeling. A pleasure to read.
Have a beautiful day. Pili

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
reply by Pili Pubul on 10-Mar-2014
    You are most welcome. Pili
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Sheep, a common sight in these parts. There are plenty of cows, horses, goats, chickens...you name a barn animal, this community has one. Oh, yeah, we even have a person who raised Emus, Lamas, and Alpacas, too! All on the same exotic farm.

Drink, little sheep! Drink and be Mary (had a little lamb...heh heh)

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
reply by Dean Kuch on 10-Mar-2014
    You too.