The Teddy Bear and the Puppy
How to be friends.36 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is sweet and flows well. The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. The artwork is perfect and enhances the read.
Thank you, harmony13
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem is sweet and flows well. The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. The artwork is perfect and enhances the read.
Thank you, harmony13
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, harmony13, for your wonderful review! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from Selina Stambi
Sigh ...! Oh, my dear Sandra .. you took me right back to my childhood and MY mummy, and my kids' childhood and ME being mummy!
What a precious gift you have, to enter the heart of a child.
Bless you, my sweet, kind friend.
Hugs and kisses,
Sonali
p.s. some thoughts below. Toss them out if they don't work! xxx
a little tear-drop trickled .. what do you think of .. a tiny teardrop .. since you have 'little' playmate immediately following?
rang, and Sue's mum came along .. mummy/ mother? ... say it out loud and see which of the three seems to work best
everywhere and will do (so?) till the end.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Sigh ...! Oh, my dear Sandra .. you took me right back to my childhood and MY mummy, and my kids' childhood and ME being mummy!
What a precious gift you have, to enter the heart of a child.
Bless you, my sweet, kind friend.
Hugs and kisses,
Sonali
p.s. some thoughts below. Toss them out if they don't work! xxx
a little tear-drop trickled .. what do you think of .. a tiny teardrop .. since you have 'little' playmate immediately following?
rang, and Sue's mum came along .. mummy/ mother? ... say it out loud and see which of the three seems to work best
everywhere and will do (so?) till the end.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, Sonali, I will be trying out your suggestions, you are really kind always helping me the way you do. Thank you!! Big hugs, xsx sandra
Comment from livelylinda
sandramitchell: a cute story I would want to read to my great-grandson. He is two and has a new puppy that he is afraid of but the puppy loves him. I'm sure that puppy will adopt one of his teddy's before long and we'll see who wins. Nice writing. livelylinda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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sandramitchell: a cute story I would want to read to my great-grandson. He is two and has a new puppy that he is afraid of but the puppy loves him. I'm sure that puppy will adopt one of his teddy's before long and we'll see who wins. Nice writing. livelylinda
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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thank you so very much, Livelylinda, I am sure your great-grandson will soon love the little puppy too. They know how to get into a child's heart. :) Sandra. xsx
Comment from bob cullen
How cute is that. I loved it, it was simple, with delightful rhyme and a lovely message.
I have no doubt little kids would love it and it would make a great picture book.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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How cute is that. I loved it, it was simple, with delightful rhyme and a lovely message.
I have no doubt little kids would love it and it would make a great picture book.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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What a lovely review, thank you so very much, Bob! :) Sandra
Comment from jmdg1954
First of all, the photo depicts the story perfectly, good choice. Secondly, the story is well told and flies very nice and easy, perfect for young children.
The rhyming scheme was well done as well, nothing forced to fit.
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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First of all, the photo depicts the story perfectly, good choice. Secondly, the story is well told and flies very nice and easy, perfect for young children.
The rhyming scheme was well done as well, nothing forced to fit.
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, John. The photo inspired the poem, it is a lovely one, isn't it. I am delighted you enjoyed it. :) Sandra. xsx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is so cute! It makes me think of Toy Story where all the toys worry they won't be the little boys favorite anymore. Darling picture and poem. rox
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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This is so cute! It makes me think of Toy Story where all the toys worry they won't be the little boys favorite anymore. Darling picture and poem. rox
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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I don't think I have seen that one, is that what it's called? I will try to find in on the internet. Thank you once again for another lovely review, Rox! The picture is wonderful, I have to agree with you there. :) Sandra. xsx
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Yes, there is Toy Story I, II & III. Really cute.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is an adorable uplifting poem Sandra and you are right, the picture is just perfect. I had a puppy in the seventies that looked just like that one except it was gray. I named him Tuffy and he was so cute he disappeared. They said the Carnival that came to town took a bunch of blooded dogs with them. Broke my heart, He was so smart! Wonderful poem. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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This is an adorable uplifting poem Sandra and you are right, the picture is just perfect. I had a puppy in the seventies that looked just like that one except it was gray. I named him Tuffy and he was so cute he disappeared. They said the Carnival that came to town took a bunch of blooded dogs with them. Broke my heart, He was so smart! Wonderful poem. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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I am delighted you enjoyed this one, Nancy. Animals do get to us, don't they. I will be terribly upset my our Millie goes, they become our children, don't they. Thanks again, my dear friend. xsx Sandra
Comment from Gungalo
This is so perfect Sandra. A learning experience and love. Sigh, what we all could learn from your stories is truly amazing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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This is so perfect Sandra. A learning experience and love. Sigh, what we all could learn from your stories is truly amazing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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You say the nicest things, Gungalo, thank you so much, dear! xsx Sandra
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with well/tell. Good description and alliteration. Good storytelling. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with well/tell. Good description and alliteration. Good storytelling. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Righteous Riter! xsx Sandra
Comment from Debra White
Aw Sandra, what a gorgeous message. Such a lovely poem, well written as always in perfect rhyme and meter. The first 2 stanzas reminded me a little of the story line in Toy Story, when Andy's toy cowboy Woody felt usurped by the arrival of Buzz Lightyear! I really enjoyed reading your poem :) Kindest regards as always, Debra xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Aw Sandra, what a gorgeous message. Such a lovely poem, well written as always in perfect rhyme and meter. The first 2 stanzas reminded me a little of the story line in Toy Story, when Andy's toy cowboy Woody felt usurped by the arrival of Buzz Lightyear! I really enjoyed reading your poem :) Kindest regards as always, Debra xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Debra, you are always so kind with your reviews. I really appreciate them too. Thank you, my dear friend. xsx Sandra