Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

great picture yes this is how a headache feels
your senryu has the correct components
your words are strong and direct allows the reader to see the image clear
flows well easy read
cheers SC

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013

Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie

reply by Smoothiecool on 17-Dec-2013

welcome to all
cheers SC

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

LOL. Two doctors are like two different pills. Sometimes I wonder if the cure is better than the problem? Maybe you should leave this one on your doctors chair. Great job! Les

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013

Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie