Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Being Different"A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from rhonny
It's an interesting work, but I think that without the music, the words don't have the same impact, and the flow is interrupted by irregular lines.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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It's an interesting work, but I think that without the music, the words don't have the same impact, and the flow is interrupted by irregular lines.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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The Midi link is there do you have a Media player of some description? Thanks for the review
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:O)
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Did you try the Midi file?
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No I don't :O)
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No, can't do it :O)
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:( sorry thanks for the heads up on the "it's" I thought I fixed that before hehe
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Oooops! hehehe! :O)
Comment from barkingdog
We are all a little bit different. We just have to find out what herd to run with. If you're a chimp, it's best to not try and join the crocs.
Fine little ditty here, snakey.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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We are all a little bit different. We just have to find out what herd to run with. If you're a chimp, it's best to not try and join the crocs.
Fine little ditty here, snakey.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thanks bd Appreciate the review.
Comment from Uniqusatya
That was fabulous.Simply loved it.The verse itself is so much in itself and the music did show its magic.
Enjoyed reading this piece of word.
Good read indeed.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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That was fabulous.Simply loved it.The verse itself is so much in itself and the music did show its magic.
Enjoyed reading this piece of word.
Good read indeed.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2013
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Thanks Uniqusatya Interesting Member name.
Comment from Glasstruth
The lyrics have a strong message, and being different is definitely not desired, but are we all sheep? No. My favorite is the last verse. I think you could add more to this. It would only get stronger if the same quality of writing is there. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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The lyrics have a strong message, and being different is definitely not desired, but are we all sheep? No. My favorite is the last verse. I think you could add more to this. It would only get stronger if the same quality of writing is there. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks Les, getting ready, real soon; to share some portions of my book I have been playing around with for years.
I agree there are probablyl more verses could be added to the poem/song. I guess you have picked up it is mainly to do with churches and people's behaviour that - of course - is not limited to church folks hehe. Thanks again.
Comment from DanielEkine
You just cleansed me with your beautiful work. I love the uniqueness and ingenuity your song lyrics display.
My best part.
"And get to church on time
Don't worry if the only ones there
are the organist and preacher
There may be another whose
really counting on you.
So be a good disciple
In all you do."
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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You just cleansed me with your beautiful work. I love the uniqueness and ingenuity your song lyrics display.
My best part.
"And get to church on time
Don't worry if the only ones there
are the organist and preacher
There may be another whose
really counting on you.
So be a good disciple
In all you do."
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Hi mate have you joined my Fan Club yet? Will get over and read some more of that interesting No0vel you were working on. Do I need to look at some preceding chapters? HEHE! Thanks for the review, All the best may I ask your age? I am 62.
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I am 27. Would be 28 in a few days.
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Yeah well I figured you was a young un as I know you young folks never got the same English Writing etc ed as us old folks ok.
Can't believe the number of kids getting into high school that still can't read these days...worse than your time even I reckon.
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hey I thought you went through here in the old Stand alone days. Glad you came back a gain. Try and see if I can send you the Midi file for the tune.
Comment from simonbagh
Be a little bit different
And no one talks to you.
That is honestly true, and I loved it very much, a nice work, well don
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Be a little bit different
And no one talks to you.
That is honestly true, and I loved it very much, a nice work, well don
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks Simon is it appreciate your review.
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello sankey
I very much like this entry
there is so much humanity within the words and theme
you actually have truth within your words
your ending line is priceless and valuable
if only all thought in that manner
thank you for sharing
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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hello sankey
I very much like this entry
there is so much humanity within the words and theme
you actually have truth within your words
your ending line is priceless and valuable
if only all thought in that manner
thank you for sharing
this was a pleasure to read
ann marie
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks Ann Marie appreciate your kind words and spot on review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A nice inspirational lyrical poem on how to live differently and still be close to keep the relation and enjoy the state of living, nice rhythm and harmony on restoration of relation. 05/729
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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A nice inspirational lyrical poem on how to live differently and still be close to keep the relation and enjoy the state of living, nice rhythm and harmony on restoration of relation. 05/729
Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much. I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem/song. Always encouraging when people understand the motive for the work.. and direction we are heading in.
Comment from Jackarrie
I absolutely love the first verse, I says so much and so many will emphatise with it.
1.Be a little bit diff'rent
And no one talks to you.
Be handicapped no kids -
you've really got a problem
Don't try to be friendly
Just wait till you're told
to shake hands
Then when no one comes near you
Just understand.
Well done Mary
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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I absolutely love the first verse, I says so much and so many will emphatise with it.
1.Be a little bit diff'rent
And no one talks to you.
Be handicapped no kids -
you've really got a problem
Don't try to be friendly
Just wait till you're told
to shake hands
Then when no one comes near you
Just understand.
Well done Mary
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the review Mary first cab off the rank I think
Comment from Ceabiscuit
Yes no matter what you do you have to feel like you conform, I like the notion of the everyday that feels that it has to different, if only it were true?
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Yes no matter what you do you have to feel like you conform, I like the notion of the everyday that feels that it has to different, if only it were true?
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2013
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Thanks Cea Biscuit appreciate the review