My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Beautiful Release."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from country ranch writer
CUTTING ONES SELF IN ORDER TO FEEL AND BE CLEANSED OF HER WRONG DOING IS NOT THE WAY TO GO JUST SAYING IF IT DON'T STOP IT WILL STOP YOU DEAD IN YOUR TRACKS WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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CUTTING ONES SELF IN ORDER TO FEEL AND BE CLEANSED OF HER WRONG DOING IS NOT THE WAY TO GO JUST SAYING IF IT DON'T STOP IT WILL STOP YOU DEAD IN YOUR TRACKS WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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It's not about me and yes I agree they may pay the ultimate price one day. I don't suppose that's foremost in their minds when they do it. That's why it's so sad. Thanks for reading. Jaq x
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I DIDN'T THINK IT WAS ABOUT YOU. ITS JUST A GENERAL POEM OF WHAT SOME PEOPLE SEE AND DO . I HAVE A NIECE WHO IS A CUTTER SHE HAS BEEN SINCE SHE WAS 9
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Ahhhh now I understand. It's just when you type in capital letters it seems quite cross.
I hope your niece has all the help she needs. May God bless and keep her safe. Jaq x
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ITS GETTING LATE AND THE EYES ARE NOT DOING WELL IN THIS LIGHT
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Awww take care x
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TKY
Comment from Rondeno
My goodness, this is bleak! It goes some way to explaining self-harm. It's certainly a very effective poem ... one can only hope that it is not autobiographical.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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My goodness, this is bleak! It goes some way to explaining self-harm. It's certainly a very effective poem ... one can only hope that it is not autobiographical.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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No it isn't. The notes say what it's about. It's a family member. Thanks for your review and I'm glad you understood the words mo chara. :) Jacquie xxx
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What an eejit. I didn't see the notes.
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But a lovely eejit :) hahahaha x
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Thank you! I've a favour to ask ... I'll email you a bit later.
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No probs x
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(ingratiating grin)
And there's another one about una piedra negra
