Straw-Sticks-Bricks & Plastic
A Curly Tail of Dodgy Porkmanship...31 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Can't tell you how happy I am to see you back to writing my friend. Slow roasted pig it is then you see, the pig stayed put while the wolf ate me...lol loved it. xoxo debs
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Can't tell you how happy I am to see you back to writing my friend. Slow roasted pig it is then you see, the pig stayed put while the wolf ate me...lol loved it. xoxo debs
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Thanks Kiwi, much appreciated your review.
Cheers P
xoxo
Comment from Nebukadneser
Brilliant! Delightful! Funny! Clever! You must have had a lot of ham fermenting with the Xmas cake to come up with something as original and humorous. I laughed my porky ass off curling my finger through my tail before it could meet terra firma and become wolf's next meal.
you rock, me girl.
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Brilliant! Delightful! Funny! Clever! You must have had a lot of ham fermenting with the Xmas cake to come up with something as original and humorous. I laughed my porky ass off curling my finger through my tail before it could meet terra firma and become wolf's next meal.
you rock, me girl.
Well done
you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Many thanks, what a lovely review.
Most appreciated.
Hope your porky ass was okay when it bit the dust! LOL *oink*
Cheers P
Comment from charlyann
haha that was friggin great!!!!..wonderfully written ...I'm a sucker for this kind of poetry when it's done well...it's my favourite kind to write and my favourite kind to read...I just loved it...I'm still laughing
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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haha that was friggin great!!!!..wonderfully written ...I'm a sucker for this kind of poetry when it's done well...it's my favourite kind to write and my favourite kind to read...I just loved it...I'm still laughing
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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LMAO what a terrific review charlyann. Many thanks.
I actually just reviewed a winner of yours.
I really appreciate the sixer.
Cheers P
PS Nice to meet another sucker! *oink*
Comment from 4tulips
This must have been a lot of fun to write. It sounded similar to a story I once knew about pigs, but I by far liked this one much more. Just when they thought they had this wolf beat, the wolf came out with his belly full. You did a great job creating this story in a poem. I hope it does well for your contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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This must have been a lot of fun to write. It sounded similar to a story I once knew about pigs, but I by far liked this one much more. Just when they thought they had this wolf beat, the wolf came out with his belly full. You did a great job creating this story in a poem. I hope it does well for your contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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LOL It WAS a lot of fun to write...just not sure who would appreciate it...
It seems there are those that do...LOL
Cheers and thanks for a delightful response to my poem.
P
Comment from Papabearua
Quite a twist on the three little pigs or, should I say, the four little pigs. Progress and modern packaging have turned these little pigs into Wolfie's banquet. Well written and very humorous.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Quite a twist on the three little pigs or, should I say, the four little pigs. Progress and modern packaging have turned these little pigs into Wolfie's banquet. Well written and very humorous.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Many thanks, I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers P
Comment from mjordahl
Ha ha Ha that was hilarious. You had me going. The pig brother named spare rib, and their shit filled pants.Great way too tell a story in a poem.Good Luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Ha ha Ha that was hilarious. You had me going. The pig brother named spare rib, and their shit filled pants.Great way too tell a story in a poem.Good Luck with the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Many thanks. I enjoyed your outline of the fave bits...Classic! LOL
Cheers P
Comment from gazzagodbod
nooo you killed the piggies lol though if there is any spare bacon lol great fun this one well done my friend xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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nooo you killed the piggies lol though if there is any spare bacon lol great fun this one well done my friend xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Ya, I killed the pigs.
LOL
No bacon left...I deep fried it this morning and then it slid down with a coupla fried eggs. LOL
Cheers P
PS Thanks for a porke...whoops I mean corker review. x
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is a fun spin on a child's tale we often tell. This reminded me of the True Story of the Three Little Pigs. You should definitely read it. Great job friend
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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This is a fun spin on a child's tale we often tell. This reminded me of the True Story of the Three Little Pigs. You should definitely read it. Great job friend
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Many thanks, I really appreciate it.
What? There's a real story?
Cheers P
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Oh yeah. Look it up, you won't be disappointed
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
I love the style and momentum in this story poem. Animal voices all authentic. Exceedingly amusing--these characters seem so URBAN!!! Even down to the ghetto-speak. Bravo! Bravo! Seraph ~
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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I love the style and momentum in this story poem. Animal voices all authentic. Exceedingly amusing--these characters seem so URBAN!!! Even down to the ghetto-speak. Bravo! Bravo! Seraph ~
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Thanks Sera...I enjoyed your review.
Bravo right back.
cheers P
Comment from dmt1967
This is a nice twist on the tail this was very funny I loved the story in the poem very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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This is a nice twist on the tail this was very funny I loved the story in the poem very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Many thanks, I appreciate your review.
Cheers P
