Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

The sad part is they still think they look like they did way back then. The picture went so well with the poem. But I like that part about them remembering way back to their youth.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Aint it the truth.... Thanks for the read and comments

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Great picture to accompany this fun and funny little six line poem. I think you met the requirements beautifully. Very nicely done and good luck.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for your read and comment. I am glad you liked it

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Great development of your poem from the first line to the last that told a story about leering old men. One thing though I think this is true of men of all ages :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

True ,but the old guys can only dream. Thanks for the read and comment

Comment from Simple Reflection

Excellent

Red is the perfect color for this poem. The lady in the photo also sets up the poem. You do an excellent job of meeting the syllable criteria. It reads smoothly, and you give the reader a clear image with the chosen words.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. Glad you liked it

Comment from PUPA

Excellent

Hi there Anonymous,
I woke up to a very bad mood this morning, but there you are, granting me a big smile. I love those well chosen words in such a short restricted poem. The presentation is fabulous.
Good luck, I am sure you will do well.
Love
Pupa

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for your positive comments. It is my extreme pleasure to start your day with a smile. That's what this writing is all about; stimulating those who read your verse. Keep smiling and have a greet day

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Sweet beautiful lady but the older men already pass their time. Now they can imagine if they can wind back the clock. Good write. Short and sweet, and yes, sexy too. Looks like this pic is very likable as I have seen it before in other writing (I think). Good work. Cheers.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks for the great comments. Glad you liked it

reply by 9999pool on 28-Nov-2012

Welcome. Cheers.

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

O yes the picture itself speaks for the poetry, liked your, 2,2,2,2,9,9 very creative and imaginative, best of luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks for the read and comment

Comment from mtnspirit

Excellent

Good job with your poem. Syllable count right on. Great descriptions. Color scheme and art make an excellent presentation. A pleasure to have read and reviewed. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks for the read and comment Glad you enjoyed it

Comment from Lastamen

Excellent

Beautiful and alluring photo which depicts the alluring and suggestive poetic verse. A very challenging form of poetry that you have executed very well.

Till the last amen.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for such positive comments

Comment from snemes

Excellent

I'm not a man, but I can relate to this. It does take you back when you see a gorgeous young person. I love the lines: Burned the minds of the leering old men As they watched and wished for way back when. This made me smile. Fun and true.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Makes me glad I touched a nerve. Glad I got a smile. Thanks for the read