Lint
Yeah, Everyone Gets It ...52 total reviews
Comment from sasil
This is so much fun to read--your lines are light and bouncy, the rhymes are amusing. My own hairy hubs has this affliction while I do not (blame the hair). Thanks for making me smile!
S.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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This is so much fun to read--your lines are light and bouncy, the rhymes are amusing. My own hairy hubs has this affliction while I do not (blame the hair). Thanks for making me smile!
S.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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LOL Thanks sasil and this was a fun write despite the fluff factor...your warm comments and review most appreciated.
Closet xo
Comment from livingwords
Excellent. So witty! How do I get this picture off my I-phone. Tell this guy to stop wearing that green shirt. Quite the accomplishment on this . IRS too good. Dan :))
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Excellent. So witty! How do I get this picture off my I-phone. Tell this guy to stop wearing that green shirt. Quite the accomplishment on this . IRS too good. Dan :))
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Hahaha...I guess if the shirt was yellow then the lint would correspond huh? LOL Thanks for a delightful review...now...YOUR phone - YOUR problem...haha
Good luck removing the phone lint! Bahaha
Cheers and thanks again.
Closet
Comment from Glasstruth
The most interesting poem I've ever read about lint, and the sing-songness of your rhyming had my ears in ecstasy. It proves any topic is a good one. This should be a sixer. It's that good! Les
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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The most interesting poem I've ever read about lint, and the sing-songness of your rhyming had my ears in ecstasy. It proves any topic is a good one. This should be a sixer. It's that good! Les
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Why thanks so much and this is by far one of the weirdest I have ever written but the fluff factor seemed to work with this one. LOL thanks a bunch Les.
Closet
Comment from Frankeddy
Hey ! You did it again. Marg said lint that's a funny thing to write about.
I explained to her I think she was testing herself,with her gift of rhyme she has
the ability to write a poem about anything and your gift of humor makes the poem humorous. Your foot notes make it sound I could have been right.
That's a first in 60 years.
Great work. Thanks for sharing. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Hey ! You did it again. Marg said lint that's a funny thing to write about.
I explained to her I think she was testing herself,with her gift of rhyme she has
the ability to write a poem about anything and your gift of humor makes the poem humorous. Your foot notes make it sound I could have been right.
That's a first in 60 years.
Great work. Thanks for sharing. Frankeddy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Haha, thanks buddy...I did exercise my right to answer the call of a challenge ...I appreciate your appreciation. Closet xoxo
PS Really? first time in 60 years...good for you. Better celebrate! LOL
Comment from missy98writer
CPJ,
that photo of belly button lint is gross, I hope that' your hubby's and not yours. It's harry. You poem is cleverly written and cheeky. I loved it. You naughty poet. Excellent word structure, great rhyme and effective use of alliteration and metaphor caps off your poem. Your imagery is swell and paints a mental picture in the readers head. My favorite lines are: "Yes it flocks, to feet in socks Through special forms of friction There it goes, between your toes And flaunts all jurisdiction." Thanks so much for sharing your poem that gives the reader pause for reflection. You write very well and I'd recommend you poem to other reviewers. Thanks for sharing and making me ROTFL. You cheeky broad. What's next boogers or snot? Or that crust under your fingernails. Ewe! Keep on making em laugh, my friend. Peace out...Melissa.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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CPJ,
that photo of belly button lint is gross, I hope that' your hubby's and not yours. It's harry. You poem is cleverly written and cheeky. I loved it. You naughty poet. Excellent word structure, great rhyme and effective use of alliteration and metaphor caps off your poem. Your imagery is swell and paints a mental picture in the readers head. My favorite lines are: "Yes it flocks, to feet in socks Through special forms of friction There it goes, between your toes And flaunts all jurisdiction." Thanks so much for sharing your poem that gives the reader pause for reflection. You write very well and I'd recommend you poem to other reviewers. Thanks for sharing and making me ROTFL. You cheeky broad. What's next boogers or snot? Or that crust under your fingernails. Ewe! Keep on making em laugh, my friend. Peace out...Melissa.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Thanks missy...yes the pic is gross but I found it fully funnny. Cheers on your delightful review. Most appreciated.
CPJ xoxo
Comment from Buddhapest18
Attractive picture there! thats your stomah right...il just assume ;)Wow if you can write such a bouncy creatively fun poem about lint it says lot about your poetry abilities. "Holy moly roly Pollys shitty little devils" is my fav line. Don't think you missed any fine detail to the art of delinting oneself. Gritting teeth included. Damn all this hard work to look good! Form is objectively perfect but don't think you need a comma after "pain-free" and "remnants" is a tricky word when it comes to counting syllables. This is all the constructive criticism I can find. Your poems brighten my
day :) looking forward to your next about........boogers ;) do it
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Attractive picture there! thats your stomah right...il just assume ;)Wow if you can write such a bouncy creatively fun poem about lint it says lot about your poetry abilities. "Holy moly roly Pollys shitty little devils" is my fav line. Don't think you missed any fine detail to the art of delinting oneself. Gritting teeth included. Damn all this hard work to look good! Form is objectively perfect but don't think you need a comma after "pain-free" and "remnants" is a tricky word when it comes to counting syllables. This is all the constructive criticism I can find. Your poems brighten my
day :) looking forward to your next about........boogers ;) do it
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2011
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Hey Buddha, thanks so much and no like I said, mine is MUCH hairier! Bahaha...thanks for reading and rating and I like your modification to that line. Thanks for a great review. The "booger" thing has been done to death...but I have done two wee poems...so its either shit or booger next! LOL
Cheers Luke and thanks a bunch.
Closet xo
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I shoulda known boogers would be popular. "If you sprinkle when you tinkle, please be neat and wipe the seat" haha ya maybe poop, or ass cream would take the cake
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Haha...cute.
Ass cream? Nope...
It'll be crusters or poop.
Cheers Jesta xo
Comment from MissMerri
Yep, you could write about anything and it would be interesting, if for no other reason than the clever and creative way that you write. I'm not particularly interested in lint, but I'm interested in the way you talk about it and the way you write every other line with a rhyme inside and maintain for eight stanzas such flawless rhythm. You are quite the poet, CloPo. What you've accomplished here is truly remarkable, I think. Yes, lint can be interesting. I'm curious, who did you get to pose for that picture?
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Yep, you could write about anything and it would be interesting, if for no other reason than the clever and creative way that you write. I'm not particularly interested in lint, but I'm interested in the way you talk about it and the way you write every other line with a rhyme inside and maintain for eight stanzas such flawless rhythm. You are quite the poet, CloPo. What you've accomplished here is truly remarkable, I think. Yes, lint can be interesting. I'm curious, who did you get to pose for that picture?
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Adonna, I appreciate your delightful review and sorry for tardy response, busy week prior. Cheers Clo xoxo
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow lol i so needed that picture i put belly button fluff on a few days ago this would have been perfect for it great poem to my friend loved it gazzaxx
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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wow lol i so needed that picture i put belly button fluff on a few days ago this would have been perfect for it great poem to my friend loved it gazzaxx
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much friend...glad you enjoyed. Cheers closet xo
Comment from Connie C
Oh, you funny girl, you! I gotta tell you first that the picture is gross, but the kind of gross that makes one quite curious as to what our favorite funny girl has to say. And how did you ever come up with so many clever lines about a subject like lint? The funniest part is the third to last stanza where if one is really a good friend, he or she will just reach over and remove the other's belly lint. You are so funny! And I don't believe your tummy is "much hairier" either.
By the way, I really enjoyed your last PM to me, the one where you discuss the X's and the o's. It is always such a pleasure to hear from you and to get your opinion on those hot actors. I can't wait for your next post. xoxoxo
Connie
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Oh, you funny girl, you! I gotta tell you first that the picture is gross, but the kind of gross that makes one quite curious as to what our favorite funny girl has to say. And how did you ever come up with so many clever lines about a subject like lint? The funniest part is the third to last stanza where if one is really a good friend, he or she will just reach over and remove the other's belly lint. You are so funny! And I don't believe your tummy is "much hairier" either.
By the way, I really enjoyed your last PM to me, the one where you discuss the X's and the o's. It is always such a pleasure to hear from you and to get your opinion on those hot actors. I can't wait for your next post. xoxoxo
Connie
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks Connie, yep the pic is bloody disgusting but perfect for the write...loved your review and okay perhaps not quite this hairy but I did get a few extras sprouting when I was preggers...LOL WTF is the go with that? Hormones I guess!!!
Cheers Phillippa xoxoxo
Comment from words
I liked your whimsical write on lint.
You have proven that any aspect of life seen through a poet's eye can be interesting.
I especially liked:Rolled up dregs, on trouser legs
Are visibly annoying
Not accepted, quite expected
Cling-ons are deploying
Balls of fluff, such pesky stuff
As cotton, remnants gather
Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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I liked your whimsical write on lint.
You have proven that any aspect of life seen through a poet's eye can be interesting.
I especially liked:Rolled up dregs, on trouser legs
Are visibly annoying
Not accepted, quite expected
Cling-ons are deploying
Balls of fluff, such pesky stuff
As cotton, remnants gather
Sweaty skin, will chaeuffer in
Each crevice, open slather
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much I appreciate your thoughtful words, words.
Closet
