Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "To the God of the Universe"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
28 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is a very good poem with great rhyme and flow. The spiritual message is well expressed. It is well presented with the lovely rose picture. I enjoyed reading this one.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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This is a very good poem with great rhyme and flow. The spiritual message is well expressed. It is well presented with the lovely rose picture. I enjoyed reading this one.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review. It really lifted my spirit.
Comment from Charlene0513
To sarahice,
A lovely, spiritual poem that you have written bestowing all of God's goodness to His Glory.
Words can mean so much, but the praise we give to our Lord and Saviour, never seems to be enough when you think of what He has done for us.
Great imagery and alliteration used.
*(I hear) [hearing] Your whispers, as soft as the breeze.
* (Singing) [and sing] to You praises in sweet, soft refrain.
**Just a thought: therefore keeping your poem all capitolized
Charlene
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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To sarahice,
A lovely, spiritual poem that you have written bestowing all of God's goodness to His Glory.
Words can mean so much, but the praise we give to our Lord and Saviour, never seems to be enough when you think of what He has done for us.
Great imagery and alliteration used.
*(I hear) [hearing] Your whispers, as soft as the breeze.
* (Singing) [and sing] to You praises in sweet, soft refrain.
**Just a thought: therefore keeping your poem all capitolized
Charlene
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for a wonderful and encouraging review with good and valid suggestions. Sarah
Comment from Penpal
This is a beautiful prayer in smooth rhyming couplets. I felt the sincerity in your words, and the strong faith.
One observation:
making (me) every wit whole. ...did you mean "my"?
Favorite:
Basking in Your sunshine by the shade of the trees,
hearing Your whispers, as soft as the breeze.
Love the imagery here.
Pen
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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This is a beautiful prayer in smooth rhyming couplets. I felt the sincerity in your words, and the strong faith.
One observation:
making (me) every wit whole. ...did you mean "my"?
Favorite:
Basking in Your sunshine by the shade of the trees,
hearing Your whispers, as soft as the breeze.
Love the imagery here.
Pen
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you Penpal for your wonderful review, encouraging and helpful. Sarah
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful poem of prayer and praise, a love that lifts to the Heavens and calls out for God. i loved reading this work. i am in the middle of writing another poetry book and its all Christian poems. i read in your bio you were a missionary. that is wonderful.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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this is a beautiful poem of prayer and praise, a love that lifts to the Heavens and calls out for God. i loved reading this work. i am in the middle of writing another poetry book and its all Christian poems. i read in your bio you were a missionary. that is wonderful.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you sweetwoodjax for giving me six stars for my poem! Really appreciate you taking your time to write these words. They were so helpful!
Comment from Victorian Lady
Your praise poem is very lovely. The last stanza is so beautiful, it would make an excellent song.
Feeling Your love and Your warm, sweet embrace,
I praise and adore You; I lift up my face
and sing to You praises in sweet, soft refrain.
In my heart do I worship Your loveliest Name.
Your rhymes are great, and your humble and sincere tone is very refreshing. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Your praise poem is very lovely. The last stanza is so beautiful, it would make an excellent song.
Feeling Your love and Your warm, sweet embrace,
I praise and adore You; I lift up my face
and sing to You praises in sweet, soft refrain.
In my heart do I worship Your loveliest Name.
Your rhymes are great, and your humble and sincere tone is very refreshing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you Victorian Lady for your encouraging and helpful words about my poem, it was really helpful.
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You are welcome!
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderful poem that flows so well is concise and has the most expressive of dialogues that is so inspiring and well executed. Your poem/prayer says so much and is eloquently worded and most creative plus it makes one think very carefully about your words here. With excellent word play and with an artistic expressed tone this is a well thought out and written piece of poetry but mostly I think a prayer for God.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2010
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This is a wonderful poem that flows so well is concise and has the most expressive of dialogues that is so inspiring and well executed. Your poem/prayer says so much and is eloquently worded and most creative plus it makes one think very carefully about your words here. With excellent word play and with an artistic expressed tone this is a well thought out and written piece of poetry but mostly I think a prayer for God.
valkarei...
Comment Written 15-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2010
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Hi! Valkarie! Thank you for your great review. I'm glad you really like it. Sarah
Comment from Occasional Beauty
This was a nice insprational poem. I liked the rhyme scheme you used. The flow read pretty smooth, with no mistakes seen. Good job.
I liked the opening lines:
To the God of the universe, I humbly pray.
Wash me and cleanse me by Your Spirit today.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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This was a nice insprational poem. I liked the rhyme scheme you used. The flow read pretty smooth, with no mistakes seen. Good job.
I liked the opening lines:
To the God of the universe, I humbly pray.
Wash me and cleanse me by Your Spirit today.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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Thank you LightBearer for your encouraging review. Appreciate it very much.
Comment from MizKat
Sara - Your poem of praise and love is a work of art. It is a delight to read and remember how good God is to each of His children. Kat
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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Sara - Your poem of praise and love is a work of art. It is a delight to read and remember how good God is to each of His children. Kat
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much MizKat for your encouraging review, It means so much to me.
