Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Cop"memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from RKagan
This is a superb tribute to your brother. He sounds like the perfect police officer. Honest, trustworthy, kind and just. We need more of them. good job.
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This is a superb tribute to your brother. He sounds like the perfect police officer. Honest, trustworthy, kind and just. We need more of them. good job.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from Sharon Lee
A great dedication to the police force. Nicely put together, I enjoyed the last line it's so truthful, they cry justice. ... well done good luck in the contest
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A great dedication to the police force. Nicely put together, I enjoyed the last line it's so truthful, they cry justice. ... well done good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Super writing- perfect entry and presented perfectly as well. Looks like a great contender! Thanks so much for sharing and wishing you the best of luck in the contest! Betty
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Super writing- perfect entry and presented perfectly as well. Looks like a great contender! Thanks so much for sharing and wishing you the best of luck in the contest! Betty
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from rivki1111
Hi, good clarity lpyramid. A little naive perhaps, as I don't think the poem reflects the attitude of a lot of police. It is a tough call being a cop though. They often only have friends within the force.
No suggestions for improvement, hence the five star rating.
Thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, rivki
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Hi, good clarity lpyramid. A little naive perhaps, as I don't think the poem reflects the attitude of a lot of police. It is a tough call being a cop though. They often only have friends within the force.
No suggestions for improvement, hence the five star rating.
Thanks for sharing your poetry, cheers, rivki
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful clarity poem with great message, i enjoyed reading it and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a beautiful clarity poem with great message, i enjoyed reading it and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
thanks for honoring the men and women in law enforcement. Your Clarity Pyramid is wonderfully written. Great juxtaposition of art work to theme of poem. I enjoyed the fourth, fifth sixth and seventh lines the best. Cleaver use of alliteration and metaphor. Your poem 'Cop' is an excellent entry in the writing prompt to Write a Clarity Pyramid. Good luck in the voting booth.
Missy.
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Poet,
thanks for honoring the men and women in law enforcement. Your Clarity Pyramid is wonderfully written. Great juxtaposition of art work to theme of poem. I enjoyed the fourth, fifth sixth and seventh lines the best. Cleaver use of alliteration and metaphor. Your poem 'Cop' is an excellent entry in the writing prompt to Write a Clarity Pyramid. Good luck in the voting booth.
Missy.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from katz meow
This is such an awesome and wonderful example of a Clarity Pyramid, it's just totally amazing. This is an exceptional six star write, but I don't have any left...katz meow
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This is such an awesome and wonderful example of a Clarity Pyramid, it's just totally amazing. This is an exceptional six star write, but I don't have any left...katz meow
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from lola29
Your entry is a wonderful sentiment for those brave men and women who serve to keep the peace. They put their lives on the line for us each and every day, and I for one, am very thankful.
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Your entry is a wonderful sentiment for those brave men and women who serve to keep the peace. They put their lives on the line for us each and every day, and I for one, am very thankful.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Comment from Minglement
I love this lovely entry for the clarity pyramid contest. It's a great tribute to those who do an amazing job. We are so grateful someone is willing to do it. Bless them all and their families. Great entry. Good luck.
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I love this lovely entry for the clarity pyramid contest. It's a great tribute to those who do an amazing job. We are so grateful someone is willing to do it. Bless them all and their families. Great entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
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You're very welcome. Take care, Marcia
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author,
Indeed you are so right of what you said in your contest poem about our kind, thoughtful and very courageous men or women on the Police Force.
Gert
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Hello author,
Indeed you are so right of what you said in your contest poem about our kind, thoughtful and very courageous men or women on the Police Force.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
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thank you
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You are welcome
Gert
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.