Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Sending You My Love."memiors from my life experiences.
42 total reviews
Comment from colin
I love your message of universal love, and how free it is!If people only knew how to love(unconditionally), the gift
of God, the world would be a far more loving environment. So let's all learn the gift of love and transcend to a higher vibration; that of God.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading and receiving this excellent message of love( I felt it in my heart);thank you and may peace be truly with you Keimosobie...Colin.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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I love your message of universal love, and how free it is!If people only knew how to love(unconditionally), the gift
of God, the world would be a far more loving environment. So let's all learn the gift of love and transcend to a higher vibration; that of God.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading and receiving this excellent message of love( I felt it in my heart);thank you and may peace be truly with you Keimosobie...Colin.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thanks im glad you felt it. that was the nicest reply i got. Tim
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You're so very welcome Tim, absent healing is done this way, I know, I do it; peace be with you...Colin.
Comment from mik4L
This is my first experience with this format. I like it and I think you have done a very good job presenting this poem. The format lends it self well to your content and message.
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This is my first experience with this format. I like it and I think you have done a very good job presenting this poem. The format lends it self well to your content and message.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thank you.
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You're welcome. :-)
Comment from Robert D Wilson
Another very nice villanelle, keimosobie! This contains a very good message of giving yourself in love. Beautiful words and rhyming.
Thanks for sharing this.
Blessings,
Bob
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Another very nice villanelle, keimosobie! This contains a very good message of giving yourself in love. Beautiful words and rhyming.
Thanks for sharing this.
Blessings,
Bob
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thanks bob
Comment from c_lucas
Love can be expressed on a written page. It can be shown in unselfish acts. It gains life when two hearts are bonded together. This is very well written.
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Love can be expressed on a written page. It can be shown in unselfish acts. It gains life when two hearts are bonded together. This is very well written.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thank you Lucas.
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You're welcome.
Comment from chita
You have great artwork and your author notes are superb-your poem flows as if someone was waltzing--you write this poem as if it were a letter to someone to let them know that they have your love--great job.
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You have great artwork and your author notes are superb-your poem flows as if someone was waltzing--you write this poem as if it were a letter to someone to let them know that they have your love--great job.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thank you chita and I do love someone.
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That's great and You're welcome:))
Comment from Earthwriter
oved the verse and that photo is wild really out of this world i really enjoyed this post excellent job wish i had a six to give you
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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oved the verse and that photo is wild really out of this world i really enjoyed this post excellent job wish i had a six to give you
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thanks earth writer and I gave all my sixes away allready also. thank you.
Comment from Fish
'My soul was set to soaring off this page-
A gift which opened up into a stage'
I'm just giving you an example of how to
improve the iambics in your poem.
Generally, the villanelle is written in
iambic pentameter (ten syllables)
Ta-dum ta-dum ta-dum- ta-dum ta-dum
With a bit of work I'm sure that you can
improve this poem so that the repetition
of the lines will produce the mesmerizing
effect which the villanelle is capable of
producing in the reader.
fish
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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'My soul was set to soaring off this page-
A gift which opened up into a stage'
I'm just giving you an example of how to
improve the iambics in your poem.
Generally, the villanelle is written in
iambic pentameter (ten syllables)
Ta-dum ta-dum ta-dum- ta-dum ta-dum
With a bit of work I'm sure that you can
improve this poem so that the repetition
of the lines will produce the mesmerizing
effect which the villanelle is capable of
producing in the reader.
fish
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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thank you I will consider it.
Comment from Valkarie
Wonderfully written I like the repeated lines these go very well with the poem and in a way make it more stable.
Intriguing and with a very good flow and excellent balance this piece is a most visual and concise piece of writing.
The rhythm is good and gives it this enigmatic feel along with your strong word power, making it a very creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Wonderfully written I like the repeated lines these go very well with the poem and in a way make it more stable.
Intriguing and with a very good flow and excellent balance this piece is a most visual and concise piece of writing.
The rhythm is good and gives it this enigmatic feel along with your strong word power, making it a very creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from rosah
truly poignant tribute to love, a glorious truth, loved the line,....although the door is open, sometimes it needs a shove, thanks for sharing, blessings.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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truly poignant tribute to love, a glorious truth, loved the line,....although the door is open, sometimes it needs a shove, thanks for sharing, blessings.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Diny
A very complicated form and style in which you do so well to show us the way to preform such a feat!- Very creative and I love it when a writer writes about writing!- Bravo- and write on-Di
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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A very complicated form and style in which you do so well to show us the way to preform such a feat!- Very creative and I love it when a writer writes about writing!- Bravo- and write on-Di
Comment Written 10-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2010
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thank you.