Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from dragonqueen1983
the interaction between the two main character is very enjoyable to read and it has a cinematic quality. well done keep on writing
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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the interaction between the two main character is very enjoyable to read and it has a cinematic quality. well done keep on writing
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from ladybird
Once again a well written chapter. Pleased to hear Leya is on the mend. You have done a good job in describing the safe house, sounds lovely, lol.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Once again a well written chapter. Pleased to hear Leya is on the mend. You have done a good job in describing the safe house, sounds lovely, lol.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from pugdogy
excellent job,,,I liked the teasing between the two in this story,,-the little beige bikini...I also liked the description of the isolated cabin...You've got a great storyline going here keep up the great writing...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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excellent job,,,I liked the teasing between the two in this story,,-the little beige bikini...I also liked the description of the isolated cabin...You've got a great storyline going here keep up the great writing...
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jonesy
Well done! A professional, crisp feel to the writing and flows well. It's hard to review a book chapter without reading previous ones, but I still got a strong sense of the characters and the story.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Well done! A professional, crisp feel to the writing and flows well. It's hard to review a book chapter without reading previous ones, but I still got a strong sense of the characters and the story.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this was another great chapter that you came up with. i can almost see the characters in my mind like i'm watching it on television. can't wait for the next chapter you put out
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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this was another great chapter that you came up with. i can almost see the characters in my mind like i'm watching it on television. can't wait for the next chapter you put out
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Belinda
If the relationship is true, what a lucky woman Leya is to have the lovable Steven as a husband. The way they tease each other and Leya flirts with him is so endearing. But we'll never know...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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If the relationship is true, what a lucky woman Leya is to have the lovable Steven as a husband. The way they tease each other and Leya flirts with him is so endearing. But we'll never know...
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from shonadennis
I loved this story, it's reality and here is a man trying to hide his true feelings,also knowing he can't compromise his job. And Leya is a tease but i believe she's lonely inside. The story flows really well and your doing s great job
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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I loved this story, it's reality and here is a man trying to hide his true feelings,also knowing he can't compromise his job. And Leya is a tease but i believe she's lonely inside. The story flows really well and your doing s great job
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from maggieJo
This is a very tender and touching love story - even if Leya is in constant danger.
With Steven having such high morals and integrity - in spite of being attracted to Leya - readers want them to be in love wit one another and be the usual clean, and honorable lovers with marriage -for sure - in their hearts.
Good story
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This is a very tender and touching love story - even if Leya is in constant danger.
With Steven having such high morals and integrity - in spite of being attracted to Leya - readers want them to be in love wit one another and be the usual clean, and honorable lovers with marriage -for sure - in their hearts.
Good story
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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I really appreciate the 6 stars. Thank you so much.
Comment from mjfande
Another excellent chapter. You've done a good job at putting some akward moments into writing; not an easy task. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Another excellent chapter. You've done a good job at putting some akward moments into writing; not an easy task. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is another beautiful chapter of this intriguing novel. I am happy that Leya is fast recovering, and that the love between her and Steven is blooming. Looking out for the next chapter. kudos
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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This is another beautiful chapter of this intriguing novel. I am happy that Leya is fast recovering, and that the love between her and Steven is blooming. Looking out for the next chapter. kudos
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
